YES! I LOVE this story! I never really thought about Qui-Gon/Shmi before ... some of the issues you touch in here, about life and death and love, are just ... wow. This is beautiful!

Wonderful to see that I was not the only that saw something between these two characters that needed to be elaborated on. Great story. I love the subtitle ;) from the "Crossover".

That's a beautiful story!

that is truely the msot beautiful piece I've ever read. Qui-Gon and Shmi are the second most popular couple if the SW universe, next to Obi and Amidala. Very well written. I'm glad I waited to read it. I was reading Obi/Padme fanfics first and decided to read qui/shmi last. It was a great idea. It was beautiful.

This was a great story!

Awww, that's so sweet...I thought there was a spark between those two. So, when Shmi dies, will they finally be, you know, together? That would be, well, right. So *ahem* sequel?

Oh my god, that was...Fantastic. Lori, you're...(arg, i cant think of a word to discribe how good an author u r).

Woah... that was really good! I never though that i would read a story that I liked as much as POU but this one was excelent! You are really talented Lori.

That was really lovely, and very very well written. I learned a few new things about the force as well. )

it got boring towards the end

it got boring towards the end

Owww... this is so sweet...so romantic... I loved it. It is a great work.

Wow! What a great story! I don't usually like Qui/Shmi (they wouldn't have had any time) but you made it seem real. :-)

That was awsome! I love the thought of Qui-Gon and Shimi being together! Keep writing!

Innnnteresting...