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Micuko
2008-06-29
ch 1,
abusehah, loved it :)
Victoria Humblydum
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThe begining of the fic seemed a bit rushed. I also had trouble believing that they could "lock away the darkness in each individual". It might have been more realistic if, prehaps, Draco and some of the others had just fought on the light side. After all, each person is made up of conflicting light and dark, and it would be impossible to get rid of just the "evil" traits because the good and evil traits are so closely wound together.

I liked the line, near the end, when Draco said “Would you be upset if I told you I don’t do one-night stands?”
It made their little love game much sweeter, rather than just smuty-ness (not that i have anything against smuty-ness in general).

Oh, I also liked the bit about how Draco stacked the deck, it made me laugh and seemed to fit with his personality.

Over all, it was a cute oneshot.

~Victoria H.
Wynja
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuse-grin- this was so much fun to read... yeay for the holidays and having time to browse your stories! Damn, you have written a LOT... and I haven't read a bad one yet... ;o)
xkidrogue
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abuseCard games are suddenly so much more fun! I've loved every story of yours I've read so far.
Drarry Lover
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseNookie by numbers, hahahaha!! absolutely adored it.
StowBandGeek
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuseO.M.G. I love this so so so so good. Woot yaoi ^_^
Moretta
2007-03-26
ch 1,
abuse=)

The only thing to say, really.
Well written and an interesting game... one to remember...
Emeralde
2006-11-27
ch 1,
abuseok, I am SO gonna play this game some time...
All-Knowing Alien 2
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abuseNice. The game's a winner.
Ilikeyaoi
2006-05-26
ch 1,
abuseI give you a biggilion thumbs up. I loved it. :3
Ilikeyaoi
Raelyn Artemis
2006-04-16
ch 1,
abuseWow...greatness in words. Please continue it! I can't stand these awesomeful one-shots that keep you begging for more.
pogoyoyo
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuselove.
Lirael Yvaine le Fay
2005-12-19
ch 1,
abuseawesum... yew rock. lOl. i think yew shud keep goin actually. =]
fragmentsofthemoon
2005-11-14
ch 1,
abusesehr gut!
tis is a great story
love the card game idea!
DarkRaven1989
2005-11-09
ch 1,
abuseThis has got to be the loveliest of stories I have ever read! I'm so sorry for passing this long without it!!
MUST HAVE MORE OF YOUR STORIES!ha ha!
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