 peacejaw 2008-11-29 . chapter 10Keep up the good work! :) From what I've read so far, it's a very good story, and I'm looking forward to reading what's left of the story.
Once I'm done, I'll also look up any other stories you may have written... and I hope that they will be as good as this one. I wonder, though, if they will have just as long chapters as this one or not... not that I mind, but this story does seem to have long chapters... ;) thats great, though... so no complaints here... |
 peacejaw 2008-11-26 . chapter 7Talk about long chapters! ;) My, my, my... but that's alright. I do like this story quite a bit, so keep up the good work! :)
And I look forward to reading the rest of this story, and any others that you've written... |
 The Fink 2007-03-15 . chapter 13*giggles*
That was fantastic. I've enjoyed every line of this story. I love the characters you created, particularly Martin and Jill. I love the way you've written the canon characters and I absolutely adored the final scene. That had me laughing out loud.
Thank you :) |
 TheVulcanPrincess 2006-11-16 . chapter 13That was a great story! |
 kezya 2005-10-28 . chapter 13Wow, this story was great. I'm adding it to my fave list straight away! |
 trekboy 2005-10-06 . chapter 13That story was great.
Can you write a continuation of it on how life goes on now PLEASE! |
 Rusty Raccoon 2005-09-10 . chapter 13In one word, WOW. One of the best works I've read on this site.
It had everything I would expect out of a classic Deep Space Nine episode. It had a great plot in which you never played down or trivialised the seriousness of what was happening in any way. You got the characters perfect, I can tell that you're very familiar with DS9.
I loved the ending, how depsite the seriousness of what happened, in the end you gave us a cute moment that felt exactly how a DS9 episode would end, showing us that life goes on.
Excellent job and I look forward to your future works. |
 angiew 2005-09-10 . chapter 13Great story from beginning to end.
You kept the regular characters...wonderfully in character while adding well rounded characters of your own.
Looking forward to your NEXT story!
Angielsw |
 wolfdream 2005-09-10 . chapter 13Love the story-- I hope you write another good one real soon :) |
 Elouise82 2005-09-10 . chapter 13All right! What a way to wrap it up. Poor Kira...she's going to be fighting demons for a long time. Nice touch with having Jill and Martin stay behind. Excellent story, I'm only sad it's done! |
 Elouise82 2005-09-08 . chapter 10Go Andrews! Boy, was I relieved to see Kladzi finally get the kick in the pants he deserved. Now we're just waiting to see the final explanations and battles (there are going to be more battles, right? Kira and O'Brian do get to beat some Merchants up?) and how it all ties together. Kudos! |
 angiew 2005-09-06 . chapter 9Another cliff hanger!
I love it.
Angielsw |
 angiew 2005-09-02 . chapter 8Wonderful Chapter.
Visually striking!
Can't wait to see to see what's on the other side of that gate! And who.
Angielsw |
 Elouise82 2005-08-30 . chapter 7Wow, talk about a cliff-hanger...this just keeps getting better and better. |
 Rusty Raccoon 2005-08-27 . chapter 1I too am getting into this, it's excellent so far and I eagerly await what's going to happen with each point of view in the story. This is an easy addition to my Story alert list. |