Not bad... spacing was off, a few errors in spelling, and a few gramatical goofs but the plot was excellent. keep improving.

Great story. There were a few spelling errors and things of the sort, but I suppose it can be expected.

You have a very unique plot. I can't say I'm absorbed, but I love how your story is set in the Archie/SatAM universe. I'm writing one myself (though only SatAM, I don't read Archie), if you'd like to take a look.

I love how you're being so consistent too. The quality of your writing's good, pretty much. You seem to have most of everyone in character. Just work on the grammar/spelling/format issues, and you'll have a top notch story!

In simple words, thanks for putting up a good, /diverse/ story and happy writing!

Great update! Such a curious new character, and I'm interested to learn more about him. Keep it up!

Yes! Finally a story with the Sonic-verse I like! Great action and feel for the characters. I'll keep an eye on this one. You'll probably get lots of immature, anti-SatAM/Archie reviews.. but just ignore them...