hellO! Very good story! Once again, it is well written! I love the poem. Very...poetic. lol. sorry. Anyway, keep up your good work in other stories you write :D

i loved it

That is so cute! I love it. Poetry is the coolest thing ever. Rock on!

Excellent Oneshot. Very good. The characters were very well... In character! Great Job.

It was great! Stuff should pop into your head more often! I really liked it! Heehee...
Over and out,
~StarryTian