|Reviews for Seasonal Changes|
| anonymous 1/31/12 . chapter 4
hehe, I'm a die-hard KL and AC fan, but I've always wondered if there was more to AL than was shown, and I kinda liked it actually. If it weren't for the fact that Kira and Cagalli are siblings-twins, no less-then I would have been a supporter of KC and AL... in *addition* to KL and AC, haha. Gotta love the canon pairings :D
| petaldust 11/1/09 . chapter 1
not sweet at all...
u r suck!
just like that pink head alien!ugly albino
don't say u r an asucaga fan if u ever think like ur fanfic, u freakin asshole!
| Utsukushii Kohana 6/23/08 . chapter 1
This fic was absolutely gorgeous.
I can't add anything constructive to my review because everything is fine the way it is: grammar, writing style, the depths and development of their relationship, capturing their characters,... It's all excellent.
| Rakusu 3/7/08 . chapter 4
Wow. Amazing. I was sad when Lacus and Athrun parted from each other in the fic and series. But I really enjoyed reading this! Good job!
| simply -v 10/11/07 . chapter 1
ar this fic warms my heart every time i read it :). its so nice, cute and deep.
| hellbutterflyXRIEKO 9/21/07 . chapter 3
this is such an awesome fic esp since it's an athrunlacus fanfic. you describe the characters well and in my opinion(and probably many others) you're one of the best authors out there DD i've never read a athrunlacus fanfic before and im glad you wrote it cause i'd like to see both of them together again x)
psst, im an athrun fangirl too XD
| aeternus 3/21/07 . chapter 1
I love your story )
| simply -v 11/15/06 . chapter 4
this is definitely one of the best stories ive read. its so creative, deep and meaningful. you really explored their feelings at the various situation and heck you did an awesome job, resulting in this masterpiece of yours.
i love angst/romance and lol your story had some humour in it too , yay.
it was just so sad and real! i had to say the ending was not what i wanted but again it was an understandable ending. T_T
i really dont know why you only have 26 reviews on a story like this. you have great talent in writing.
KEEP WRITING! please...
| icemint 9/2/06 . chapter 4
This is by far the best GS first person pov fic I've ever read. I really adore the LacusxAthrun angst. Thanks for writing this
| tarot-flair 6/13/06 . chapter 1
I'm so many months late in reading this fic but you'll have to forgive me because I just got into the GSeed fandom. This fic is simply wonderful. It bothers me sometimes that people always insist that Athrun and Lacus never had any feelings for each other but at that age and with the way they look *cough*, I think they would at least have affection! So I loved how you presented them falling in love and then eventually out of love when they meet their real soulmates! (yeah I'm a huge AsuCaga fangirl too...)
Your writing style is marvellous, all your quotations are used to maximum effect and.. your Lacus is fascinating although I still don't quite get how she changed so drastically from the naive girl she was at the beginning to the calm leader of the Clyne Faction... yeah so I refrain from writing her *wince*
Now I'll have to go read all your other fics )
| Soph 6/8/06 . chapter 1
I remember when I first read this I was in tears. Even the second time. But this time I didn't cry becasue the last few times I thought they weren't gonna last. But I see a tint of hope coming this way. PLz. put them togeather they work so well together. They remind me of Brian and Honey (anyone read the Trixie Belden series?). Plz. update. I repect also that this is your story and you can end it any way you want but I'm still holding on to a bit of hope.
You've got a real guft to make people cry. And I'm not the emotional kind either. So you tomperarily broke down my sheilds. And thats a task not many people have done.
Thank you for writng this.
Athrun and Lacus still hold there forever.
| MapleRose 3/27/06 . chapter 4
You know, the abruptness of the ending actually works well with this, because it's not a long fic, and it give the reader more to consider. I like how it ended in hope for the both of them, not necessarily with each other, but with their second loves. I also like the ending of Cagalli being a new Spring for Athrun, and the cycle begins again (and when you consider Destiny, they do have their autumn and winter themselves).
anyway, I also like how Athrun feels regret, but willingly forfeits because he sees how he was the one who couldn't make Lacus happy.
great story! The narrative style is really interesting and unique. again, awesome analogy to the changing seasons, and the connotations of the seasons themselves!
| MapleRose 3/27/06 . chapter 3
again, I really love the analogy to the seasons and the trees, how autumn is a time of change, and the war changed Athrun (and his father), and how he and Lacus are growing apart.
I also like how you showed that perhaps their love wasn't as strong as they thought it was, because Athrun shutted her out instead of talking to her (or maybe it's due to his brooding personality)
I like how even though Lacus tries to stay calm and rational, she's not perfect, and almost falls into blaming people. I think that both she and Cagalli came to understand how war is a vicious cycle, and they both influenced and taught Athrun that valuable lesson.
| MapleRose 3/27/06 . chapter 2
aww, cute chapter. it's good to see Athrun having fun for a change, he's always either angsting or confused...
anyway, I like the scene of how he gave her the Haro, how she liked it even though he thought it was broken.
I also like the comparison of Lacus to Athrun's mother, and how they would keep their men grounded.
the concert scene is cute too. and aww, Athrun gets his (first?) kiss -
| MapleRose 3/26/06 . chapter 1
ooh, I don't know how I've missed reading this one before...
anyway, great start. I think despite their marriage having being arranged, they did love each other once. perhaps Athrun moreso than Lacus, because of all the Haros he gave her, and that look of shock when she told him about Kira.
I like the analogy to changing seasons, and the metaphor to the seasons themselves. their meetings/interactions are sweet, and indeed realistic, esp after he came back.
some minor things I found: they met at five, but Siegel Clyne "managed to tell a four-year old...". also, you said that Athrun was away for 7 years, so she should've been 12, not 13. but these are just nit-pickings.
You do shift a bit between past and present tense, like when she's waiting for him, it's present tense: "I sit here in the garden and marvel at the beauty of spring...", then switched to past tense when she's thinking: "I stopped sipping my tea...", and when Athrun does arrive, it's past tense: "Athrun was here! I saw a black car pull up..."
that's my criticism!