Wow, I love this! Nicely written. I really enjoyed this and the analogies of each character's reaction and thinking back. Very well done!

PiG

Wow...Now that's what you call ironic. It was great, though _ I really liked it.

Dreamless_Mermaid

That's an interesting peak into the characters' minds in the new version of the events. Simple and to the point, but just detailed enough to get your imagination working :-)

Tinnie

Very good. Cute, too - something I don't add as a compliment too often, either! I especially liked young Marty's observations on Doc. "Well, I guess that if he is dangerous, it's a good thing he likes me."

Nicely written little look into docs brain, iv always wondered how those two would have met also.

Hey, this is good stuff. It all sounds so natural. The characters all seem so... right.

Especially funny is Marty's mistaking the thunder for a "death-ray blast"!

thanks for a good read,

E.D.