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| mary2000 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseUpdate soon so we can see how things are going for Nick and Greg after there fight, and see every oneat lab knows about them and if they even care! |
| Bob 2006-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw...its just so realistic...i would laugh if something like that actually happened...aw...so cute. |
| x 2005-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseHm. I wonder how he's gonna prove that... lol |
| Comette 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseOMG! This was so...So awesome for some reason...LOVE IT! |
| Sillie 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was cute. Loved it. :3 |
| GoldenKarmaAshes 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abusei get to write the first review *wohoo* i like it. maybe it's got a bit too much dialogue in it, but tastes differ i guess. the only thing that really bugged me was that "you love me? prove it!" lines at the end. first of all, they're very much out of character (imo) and, secondly, they're corny and that's the problem of too many slash fics. up to these two lines you avoided being corny, so it's really marring the reading experience that you fall back on this at the end. |