Oh, good story! I liked it. Keep up the good work.

good job i love the story!

You're a good writer. ]

Wow. Too bad there's only one story on this thingie. I only clicked on it b/c there was only one story. I debated making fun of you, but that would be mean, so i'll just say i'm sorry your story doesn't get more notice.

mel

This is very long. Too bad nobody reads it!