Wow, nice start to the story. You're obviously an extremely talented writer. Fire witches... that sounds like something from Patricia C Wrede's Dealing with Dragons series. Ahh.. Sirius! Hmm. I'll reserve judgement on the Mary Sue thing until I've read more. I do like how the people (esp the Marauders) are in character. I'd rather read a story where the characters have to resolve their differences than are perfect and happy. Yay for love-hates. *Clicks next button*

I just picked up the story and really enoyed it. You've created a unique character.

Great story. Update soon! :)

i like it. it's really cute and has a completely different view on regulus. update soon

Just found this and I enjoyed whats written (Sirius definitely needs slapping down,) but I agree with Sadlier about the age/best friend thing). Now I noticed the update dates and I hope this is not going to be one of those stories that gets forgotten and abandoned cos I hate it when I read a good story and then find out it was last updated yonks ago. So please update soon.

it was good, but...can i hit sirius with something? he's gone nuts!

I like the story a lot and I think it's really cute. However, I think it's a little odd that a 16 year old girl has only one friend, that happens to be a 12 year old boy. There's nothing wrong with this aspect of the story but I just would like to see her have more acquaintances or people she can talk to. But do whatever you want because the whole brother/sister thing is really cute.

I LOVE it! It's OFFICIALLY one of my favorites! Well, actually all of your fanfics are my favorites but ANYWAYS I'm likin' Rianna! And I went to the art dungeon site and the brothers are so hot! Sirius is so... GORGEOUS!

But nothing is better than my precious Krayon... lol.

nice intro. it will be interesting to see where you take this.