great it would be even greater if you add other chapters to say wat the r doing XP

haha i love the awkwardness between them xD

this story made me smile and in good spirits again (wooh!)

pretty cool, Bob likes it
rite Bob
"Shut up"

Giggles ^^

Nice. Really, it is. I like Jack's personality here. He's a bit daring. and Chase is really IC. And I like how you make him confused, but still IC. It's really hard to keep Chase IC but still convey emotion. This is really good.

Aww this was such a cute lil story. I loved it!!

aw. Thats so cute! Do you plan on continuing this? Cuz I would really like that.Keep up the good work!

I'm more of a Jck/Rai myself, but this shows promise ^.^
~lbc^.^

aw(cuddles snape doll) see snappy? evil IS cute!

::Claps:: It's so cute and much like Jack! lol I liked it! ^_^

Aw, cute. x3

Wow!! i loved it!!

I think you should write more. this is interesting.

that was a nice story, and this is me giving this pairing a shot. Though slightly disturbing, it was very well written and surprisingly stayed tru to character personalities. So once again, disturbed, but impressed.

AWKWARD!