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Cherrydrops12
2005-10-19
ch 1,
abusecool
bubble cat
2005-08-15
ch 1,
abusegood choice of the song.
n_s
Mma63
2005-08-15
ch 1,
abusePlease continue. Nick/Sara is allways very wellcome. They must be togheter...
Daisyangel
2005-08-15
ch 1,
abuseYes please continue this story.
csicrazii
2005-08-15
ch 1,
abusewow, this was good! continue please!
Jacinda
2005-08-14
ch 1,
abuseI'm not a huge fan of song-fics, but I really like the story that you are writing. It doesn't even need the song to go with it - it's strong enough on its own. I hope you update soon.
spooky-phoenix
2005-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abusewow great story!! I HATE HANK! HE SHOULD DIE! ok now i feel better! so anyways...keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more!! update soon!
yl
2005-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseheyy you haf a knack for emotive narration :) keep it up and i cant wait for more =p
Space-Case7029
2005-08-13
ch 1,
abuseGood start. Look forward to the next part.
pdhtgal
2005-08-13
ch 1,
abuseHi!
I really like this story so far. Please continue!
~Lisa
AnMaDeRoNi
2005-08-13
ch 1,
abuseNice start! Please keep on writing!
Sara lover
2005-08-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseI find it so confusing that so many people think Sara is so weak that she would tolerate abuse. From anyone. That just doesn't jive with what I've seen of her on screen. The Sara I see there would definetly fight back and report said abuse right away. She's seen enough abuse cases in her life, so she knows exactly who to go to and what to do. Why do people think she's so needy that she tolerate abuse just to have a boyfriend?
kritters03
2005-08-13
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat story. can't wait to read the second part.
Jordan
2005-08-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood start. More dialouge and fluff would be much appreciateed. ;) Please continue and update soon.
sidle419
2005-08-13
ch 1,
abuseI definetly think you should continue. Solid story and coming from a Grissom/Sara shipper, that's great! Keep up the good work.
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