Aww I adored this!

Well, I like Daisy adn I love the Dukes of Hazzard, but this story could use some work. I wish you would separate the lines of speech so it wouldn't be so hard to read. The plot itself has potential, but you need to branch out more and explain things a little more explicitly. I hope you don't think this is a flame. I've read a few of your other stories and I think your writing is great! Keep working on it and writing more!!

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WildWestCowgirl a.k.a crazy western flick fan ;)

good story :). but how bout putting whenever someone talks in a new line. eg.Instead of "Hey whats up?" Nigel said. "othing much i;m cool." Chris said. "Do you wanna go hang out later?" Nigel asked. "Sure." Chris replied

"Hey what's up?" Nigel said

"Nothing much i'm cool." Chris said.

"Do you wanna go hang out later?" Nigel asked.

"Sure." Chriss replied.

This was great! Almost reminds me of a certain other Hazzard gal! *winks*

You wouldn't happen to have AIM or Yahoo messenger, would you? If you do, could you let me know your signname?

wow thats really good! i like it, you should write more like it :):)

Aw.

great story. please write more.

good story, babe, just space out your paragraphs in later stories!

Not bad. It was nice to Daisy act up for change.

I love it and I think you should continue. But With Luke and Bo and so on.

great story...I would space out the paragraphs a little hard to follow. Other than that excellent story.

A bit of advice, try not to make the paragraphs that long. Seperate them more. Other than that I liked it.

I liked it! I hope you write more!

This is a great story,but you should tell the how Daisy came to be. Was Lena Jesse's sister,and why didn't she want Daisy?

good story..please write more