|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Quadrantje 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. Sad, touching, sweet, _very_ sad. I love it. It really is a beautiful story. Wow. ME |
| Tigz 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abusei woulda thought aphrodite would do somthing, after all gabriel is her friend, and xena has gotten her out of a few situations. wouldn't aphrodite go down to the other under world and try to get xena back? |
| Tali-Sarah 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful Del! |
| Xedra 2005-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very well done. You handled Ares' grief very well, and did a fine job with Dite's inner voice. Sad story, but I know it's supposed to be, so there you go. |
| Tango1 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseOh man... Del, that was one heart-rending story. I could see it all, too, exactly as you describe. Dite and Ares were totally in-character, and I love that you manage to work in a touch of bitter humour there. Even just the set-up, the idea of him going to the wrong underworld, and all the red tape -- that's so funny, and so horribly tragic. I loved it! |