it was ok but the story line is messed up because justin doesnt know hes gay until after he and justin are togethor for a while and Andrew is more the leader most of the time

Once again I want to commend this fanfic story for a very good job!

you have alot of grammer mistakes but good.

i love it, please do continue if your intending to

It was great i love it, you definatly need to make a second one you know, telling us how it all goes for the two of them. *Sigh* such a lovely couple hehe great work

Aww, how sweet and hot! I loved it!

It was very nice and fluffy fic. ;] Although Andrew was a little OOC, but the fic wouldn't be so cute if he weren't. ;) I'll gladly read your other fics for AndrewJustin. ^^

I really liked this ,its a good fic and really sweet. It doesn't really matter as this is fanfic but Andrew is VERY OOC but yoou probably know that (i'm one to talk tho!!) The fic is very sweet and I like the way you brought justin's character out a v.well done to you x

ohh!! i hope you do write lots more! haha..there are very few gay authors out there who actually write slash...umm...if this doesnt make sense, i read ur profile...UR A REALLY GOOD AUTHOR!! i loved this!! my fav pairing in dh is andrew/justin and theres soo little!! plus this was pretty realistic til the last paragraph but thats only coz the fic goes off track from the series there...this rocks! r u gonna write anymore andrew/justin? please doo!! >.< SO EXCITING!!

wow!

pretty good really interisting i guess! do some more you know how to write!!

Overall, I liked it, though I think you might want to work on your characterization just a little. In the show, Andrew's more of a jackass, and Justin's not as sure of himself. I mean, I dunno if I could picture your Andrew rocking Bree's world, and, from what he said to Gabrielle (about his "buddy"), I doubt Justin's had any previous boyfriends. Either way, this is your fic, and I guess you can write the characters however you want. I like your writing style, though, and thought the story, as a whole, was cute.

Oh, and Julie is Susan's daughter. It's Danielle Van de Kamp.

it was a good story but u should have had some kinda boi on boi sex..lol

Wonderfully done, gives you that warm and cozy "LET'S SNUGGLE OR I'LL SET YOU AND YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY ON FIRE" feeling.

With love (insert some joke about our former relationship mocking how you do.),
Ky.