Omg0.o Wouldn't is be AWSOME if someone like,I dunno, made a drawing of the picture in the locket!?:DUggh, But I wanna read more@_@ *gives cookie*XD,who dun like cookies?:3

Really out of the subject but,WHO DOESN'T LUV SHARPIES?!:D

Even if this story is completed or was made in 2005, it still is nice to leacve reviews,in my opinion I guess. Anyway *gives cookie* and i just made mash potatoes=Y So yay.

Curse you you make me hungry=D. Mash potatoes sound good right now._.

._.*gives a cookie and goes to next chapter*...Too interested in storyXD

GAH SHEENA DON HIDE IT ANYMMORED;...lol._.
That was a bad outburst for a reviw,sorryXD

Sniff,the flashback sorta made me feel somewhat sad:<
*gives a cookie* Good job for making me sniffleXD

*gives two cookies*=3 Nya~ I loved the somewhat cliffhangerXD

*gives cookie* Gosh this is so good I luv the flasback with Zelos as a child. God I would kiss Namco's ** if they made an animation showing Zelos as a child:D...Okay maybe not kiss their **>_>; But comming back to the subject I cannot to read more!^_^

Awesome story! There's just something about angsty Shelos...
My comp was running slow, so it took me forever to get this far! But I'm addicted and want more! I love the story.
Also, never try to fight Efreet with Devil's arms! Second play through and I sold all my weapons before I had beaten that one dude! (Gr! I hate Efreet now!)

NO!


Where the hell are you?



Don´t just leave me here like that!

This is eating me up allright?!


You sure as hell have a great deal of talent. I simply can´t wait to see where this is going.
And boy am I happy that you didn´t make them fall all over each other just because they were alone...


But enough about it!


I must say that you´ve really done your homework. Sheenas and Zelos reactions and ways of speaking are just spot on. I´m livin´it!

What a flow. I´m loving this more each sentence.


And Sheena binding his ankle- splendit!

You have me glued here on the spot damn it!!

And here I am like promised!



And guess what?-It´s getting better. Finally wee see some of Zelos fears. I´m simply loving it.