Thank you for taking the time to write this story and I hope you will write more SW stories in the future!

Wonderful! I cried like a baby when Anakin was finally released from his physical form and allowed to join his loved ones. I have always felt that Qui Gon might have unknowingly been Anakin's father so it was a pleasant surprise to see that brought into being in your story.

The most memorable chapter for me: Luke dying in his father's arms of old age. It was heart-wrenching and so well described that I felt I had visually witnessed it. I have pieces of stories from a handful of authors over the decades that have stayed with me because of the beauty and nobility of those excerpts. Your story of Luke and Anakin's final moments together...well, it touched me deeply and I'm not likely to forget it.

A lovely ending...a fine tapestry, story weaver. ;-)

Take care and God bless! --sws

Great finish. Loved this whole story. kinda sad it's now over, but you rounded up everything beautifully.

So Anakin FINALLY aged and died a natural death. A very interesting tale indeed!

GREAT Ending! I love it!

Fantastic! Love the story line! Keep going!

Aw, great, very entertaining! You weaved it all back together again very nicely. :)

HA 3PO is a god for real!! Quite interesting!! Hm, will Ani marry again??

I am glad you took my comments in the positive spirit with which they were intended. Again, I always feel a little creepy saying anything. I appreciate your work. Your stories have always been entertaining! :)

"The Golden Seer" ROTFLMAO - I wondered where he'd got to. I read this whole thing tonight. Thank you. And please update soon. I can't wait to see how 3PO gets Ani, his wookie friend, and Maul's son out of this mess.

Eppie

Oh boy, now they are all in deep poodoo!!

Sorry about not giving a opponion about your last chapters. Good way to take those fiends out!

I've been on a new project and working lots of overtime. :)

Going back over the recent chapters, it seems like the invasion and takeover by the Mung was big enough to have been a separate story in itself-it seemed to take the original story off track somehow. To get back to the focus of the story and re-introduce who Anakin was/is, you ended up having to scramble quickly past the widespread impact of the Mung invasion--it didn't get the depth of treatment it needed when you consider just how enormous and devastating this takeover was. The story seemed to lose its pace at that point, changing gears a lot to bring the original story line back on track.

The current chapter does appear to put it back on track but there are so many players at this point, I am having some trouble keeping track of them. (Then again, maybe it's just brain damage from my current programming project). Two small items: I did notice that you had both Anakin and his current mate carrying their 2 month old, Obi-wan, at the same time in the beginning of the current chapter. Also, many Coruscant folks could be referred to as "Coruscanti."

You have a strong imagination and a lot of good ideas, many worthy of being separate stories. Take your time in developing a smaller number of ideas in more depth to keep this story more focused and more fluid. You might save some ideas back for new, separate stories so they don't get short-changed when you have to refocus the current story back to its original story line. You've put a lot of thought and work into your stories and it shows! :)

Back in the walking metal prison again. Poor Ani!!

Hehehehe!! Ani being a brood mare is quite funny!! Now I wonder how many mothers are out there waiting for him heheheh!!