nice story. any chance for a sequal or an epilogue based on john and teyla? i just love them so much.

xoxo

Yay. They worked it out. Her reasons for avoiding him make sense. Although is the thing about never kissing a woman a typo? Because he's kissed a lot on the show. And been married. And kind of a male slut at times, as much as we love him.

You really convey his fear and nervousness well.

Seems out of character for Teyla to confide in Ronon or to tell him what John said. Now wonder he is so upset. You are really building the feeling of everyone being against John well.

Now Elizabeth is being cruel to John? What is going on with everyone treating him so badly? I love the Atlantis/Sheppard interaction. Very cool.

I like how you write Cadman here. Teyla just treats him worse and worse. Very upsetting and not like her.

How can Teyla betray him like that? Hmm. What is going on? Great start.

LOVE IT, so good :)

Oh my Gosh! I love this story! It's so good. Sheyla rocks! Oh by the way, I'm pretty sure it's Maj. Lorne, not Lauren.

Uh oh, he has even more to do now. :)

Wow, John does have a lot of work to do. Thanks for an ejoyable chapter. :)

Uh oh, they're in trouble now. Great story. I am still reading it, I've just been a tad bit busy lately. Homework, and working on my next chapter.

I hope to get a chance to read more of yours later. :)

Ooh, creepy wraith, very exciting. :)

This chapter was fabulous too. You write this pairing so well, and you're able to include many other aspects of the show.

You've actually inspired me to work on my fic some more, (when I have time).

I adored this chapter. The John and Teyla getting togetherness was rather quick, spontaneous, but it seems to fit well.

And I loved John's line about "Cool your after burners, Einstein." I think it's the physics nerd in me, but it was just great.

Aww, nervous John is so cute. :)