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| Saji 2006-01-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed reading what you have of the story so far and I can't wait to see what will happen next to Ethan. |
| Bryan 2005-11-11 ch 3, anon. | abusedid a good job on makin an ** out of Cryton, even without action this story is still holding my interest better then any other fanfic ive read so far (though ive onlie read 2 others besides urs, but so far urs is my favorite). cant wait to see wat u bring out next, please write the next chapter...Soon! ~bryan |
| Bryan 2005-11-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseits me again, this is good stuff. i like the whole storyline with politics and military and the whole advent rising world even though i havent played the game yet... sigh... ne1 wanna send me some $ so i can go buy it? lol o well keep writing i lovin this story ~bryan |
| Bryan 2005-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewow im lovin the stry so far, i want to play the game i read i up on the internet but i lack the money to buy it, however i read the basic overview on the site and im lovin ur story, neways imma go read the rest ur chapters ~bryan |
| Lune de Noir 2005-10-23 ch 1,  | abuseWay to go Kaitlin! Ethan's character is brought in wonderfully. Look forward to next chapter. Makes me want to playthe game but not the XBOX |
| SDDFOB 2005-09-24 ch 3, anon. | abusegood stuff i enjoyed it quite a bit but look forward to more action |
| The Melee Man 2005-09-08 ch 1, | abuseThey are both incredible, I cant wait to see where the story takes Ethan. I like the way you are introducing the characters, calm and smoothly, not rushed like many others, plus you havn't even said the name Gideon. Amzing. Heres waiting for more and even better chapters. |
| AwsmSteve 2005-08-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseI agree that the toned-down language actually added quite a bit to the story. Sure, it's unavoidable in some situations, but toned-down doesn't mean completely removed, does it? Overall, a very nice story. What happened to #3? Hm... Can't wait to hear more. |
| ApolloIV 2005-08-22 ch 2, | abusethe languge has been toned down thank you I enjoy your writing now lets see some action |
| ApolloIV 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abusewow this is the best story under this entire category. I have read all three stories and this is by far the most emersive. MY only opion is to tone down some of the languge. But that is just me. I hope to read more |