NICE STORY ALTHOUGH THE SPELLING WAS A BIT OFF IN THE BEGINING =P the main idea rocked! i hate how Athrun's mother died though, she was cool... and Uzumi was like a sappy priest who would kill anyone ( nice charcter change) ...Anyways i hope you will be ablw to continue your stories and finish them off ( cant wait to hear see them completed !)


Lubs, Halirae

OMG! I'm so tired! I've been searching for the book like forever!! You sure you don't know where I can buy this book, maybe on internet? I'M like DESPERATE!

Hi!! I know you can just delete this review but it's kind of important to me. I really like your story, but can't find the book “King’s Shadow” by Judith Polley!! Where do you think I can buy it?

Love your stories!!

nice ending but atrun is too... stern.

hmm.. isn't CagaLLi here Like Athrun in GS? y'know.. the whoLe chiLd and father thingy.. ^^

Ahmed EL Fasi.. Uzumi Nara Athha..

in chap five.. I beLieve there's a part there wherein you were refering to Ahmed.. not John.. ^_^

the part wherein Athrun says that he wanted to kEep CagaLLi because she was stiLL a threat to his pLans.. HA! if I knew, he aLso wanted to be with her.. *giggLes* :)

“No you can’t. "MY" poor, fooLish CagaLLi – so proud you are.” lol he's aLready owning her from that point on, ne? :>

MiLLy didn't go with Dearka? hmm.. guesS she couLdn't Leave CagaLLi.. besides, she wanted Athrun to rescue her friend.. ;)

in chap eLeven.. I beLieve there's a part there wherein you were refering to the incident that happened at garden.. not at the Lodge.. ;>

yeah Cags.. Dearka didn't broke his word.. you shouLd've toLd MiLLy tOo! :3

lol Kira wouLd dance at their wedding feast? *Lmao* the king himseLf wiLL dance? *rofL* HA! HA! HA! XD

yeah.. you were right.. Yuna couLd've pLayed Conrad's roLe.. so, what happened? why didn't you Let the purpLe headed freak who is such a poOr excuse for a character? *sniggers*

"HeLLo CagaLLi and MiLLy nice to see you, my name is Andrew but you can caLL me Andy, and this is my wife Aisha." CagaLLi, MiLLy and Andy.. lol they rhyme! ;3

yes ConniLe.. CagaLLi is now your oLder sister-in-Law.. demo, when she gets preggy and aLL.. you'LL get a younger sister.. ^.~

Athrun.. fine that house was your home.. demo, home is where the heart is.. :p

xure hope Athrun doesn't turn out to be Like Uzumi.. wanting a son tOo much.. (",)

yeah.. things went upside down.. Uzumi became Patrick.. what a change of character..

nyWeiZ, kakoii deshou fic! ;p

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yeah, I know it sounds siLLy..
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who knows?
it might actuaLLy work..
jaa ne!

lol thats sweet, lol, that'll be funny, its like yay we have our happy ending, were gonna be a family and i promise to give u a son! a year later... u said i would have a son =_=; u betrayed me! ;p nah. good story :D

-peace

it is cute. :)

sorry... wrong review. I was re-reading your fic and another fic. But... your story is da bomb i tell ya! i made it to a favorite!

OMG! I LOVE IT! I love how athrun is the bad boy this time! PLEASE! UPDATE ASAP! I'm so psyched for it!

i love the plot so much. it's really is a great story, and a happy ending. cagali and athrun finally were able to live together. it is wonderful.good job.

i like the plot!! it's so romantic and i really liked athrun's personality

nice plot! seems really interesting..hehe *sigh*...srry, but as u see, tdy is friday the 13th and ive been having nothing but bad luck...Again. and its nvr happened to me bfr, its always jus a normal day...ok well, once again, i am going to continue on with the rest of ur fic!^^

The storyline is good (I'll have to read that book someday) and you already explained about the OOCness. Still, your grammar and spelling, as well as sentence structure and so need a lot of improving. Forgive me, if I do sound mean, but this is meant to help you. Those first few chapters nearly gave me a headache. I can beta read for you if you wish. However, I liked the general idea a lot. I'm definitely going to look for "King's Shadow" and your new story "Bet With the Devil", the title alone intrigues me so I think I shall read it.

Anyway, I'm glad Athrun and Cagalli resolved their differences at the end.

Lovely story. I really liked the 18th century theme. It was really exciting and suspenseful. ^^ Happy endings rule.

PS. Update you're "The Bet with the Devil" story.