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2hot41guy 2007-09-11 ch 6,	abuseO.O! SHE TRANSFROMED AGAIN?!?!! CRIPES! U GOTS TA UPDATE PLEASY! I LOVE THIS STORY! I AM HOOKED! THIS IS MY CRACK DAMNIT! lol :D! I LVOE TI PLEASE CONITNUE! UIPDATEE!:D!
Dragontwin 2006-12-11 ch 6,	abuseI know you haven't updated in forever but I just read SOD(which I loved) and went straight to this one and loved it as well. I would like to see you finish this, it was really entertaining and you left it at such a cliff hanger! Good work, keep it up and update soon?
Someones Girl 2006-06-26 ch 6,	abusescary postion to be in for Rikku update soon id like to know how it all goes in the end such an exciting story x
callisto avalon 2006-06-25 ch 1,	abuseI read SoD a while back and now with the sequel, I must say you write really well!! You capture the characterizations perfectly. Job well done! I hope you update soon!! ^^;
keyblademastergirl 2006-05-07 ch 6,	abuseYAY! story! i love it so much keep it going plz/ byebye mewmewmonkey :)
1FRICKENgirl 2006-04-16 ch 6,	abusegod, you must hate me for not reviewing in like a billion years. but seriously, you know i loved SoD and am equally excited over this sequel. its just, having not read it in a long time, made me kinda forget the storyline and i didn't wanna jump in with a lazy review without knowing waht i was talking about. but now, having spent the last couple of hours or so catching up, =D, im very giddy haha. loving the plotline and the mystery youve got going on. the Syoheki thing makes me think of some past romance between the "Seraphim Rikku" and a similiar form for gippal -- the "Syoheki Gippal" and now they're finally coming together for another savetheworld mission! erm. sortakindamaybe. LOl i know im totally off but oh well. ahha. cant hurt to guess =) rereading bits of SoD, it seems to me that theres a different writing style in this sequel. what i dont like about this one is the dialogue seems sometimes alittle too unrealistic and typical in many fics: the "“He’s gorgeous, dammit, but that’s not the point! He’s an arrogant moron!" especially. some narrative parts are also a little bland and doesnt seem to stir any emotion in me - ME, and proabbly ONLY me! but near the end of this chapter (also the last paragraph of chapter 4, and the first paragraph of chapter 5), everything felt familiar again =) and it felt alot closer to SoD (omg, im sorry for my stupid 'feelings' that never really make sense when i read stuff =/). there was more urgency and seriousness and suspense that wasn't really present in the past chapters what with all the usual 'denial of liking gippal'. and it makes me really giddyish because i think you're finally getting to the meat of the story and i want them to go on another adventure instead of sitting around in the desert all day! LOL. im sorry if half the things i say dont make sense. but im trying to be an honest, nonlazy and as good a reviewer as you so deserve with your wonderful plot-suspense-building talent =D ahah. though it may be a while before you update (cause gundum wing is a good show yuppers lol) ill be looking forward to it when you do. and i sure hope its longer than this chapter was! lol.
Binary Love 2006-04-11 ch 6,	abuseI just got done reading SoD and rushed right to this one. Let me just say, WOW. You've really got your stuff together when it comes to this group of characters. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter! Especially since you seem to love leaving us teetering on the edge of our seats!
mecherio 2006-03-28 ch 6,	abuseYay! You like.. finally updated! Haha! Great. It seemed a little rushed to me, but there is always that one break between, right? Hehe, well. Hope you update soon!
Fanfic-Lover 2006-03-21 ch 6,	abusewow, freaky...maybe she shouldn't keep that sphere with her...haha...anyways, update soon!
Canada Eh 2006-03-17 ch 6,	abuseOh, suspense! Interesting ending, awesome as a matter of fact, though slightly confusiing :/ But, it adds to the effect. I wonder if Rikku's dream has anything to with Syoheki (shifty eyes)... Once again, I must congratulate you on another chapter well done. The wedding scene was beautiful, especially with Gippal's jealousy. And the ending... well... didn't I mention that already? Lol. I'll say it again, it was awesome. And in case I forgot in my previous review, you have a wonderful talent in describing a sphere change. It was captivating ^-^ Impatiently awaiting your next update! Canada Eh
Jedi Kacee 2006-03-08 ch 6,	abuseGah!! So good and yet so short! I can't wait until the next installment.
marajade963 2006-03-08 ch 6,	abuseHaving just read this story and the one privious to this in one fell swoop, all I can say is WOW. what a great story teller you are. Please keep it up! I've enjoyed it! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Jezzi 2006-03-05 ch 6,	abuseooh, great chapter. I especially loved the Rikku Gippal occurence... hopefully more of them will pop up. But yes, great job. I can't wait to see what happens next. That sucks and Lu and Wakka don't have a house anymore, haha.
kingleby 2006-03-04 ch 6,	abusewhoa, that was such a cool twist at the end ^_^ love it!
FairyIce 2006-03-02 ch 6,	abuseWhat a fun wedding! So Gippal and Rikku kiss, I like Gippal's reaction when she suddenly walks away as if nothing happened. I'm assuming she didn't register the kiss due to the alcohol. So yes, I'm very intrigued and curious as to what happened there in the end. I want details! I like the way you presented it, we're just as clueless as Rikku and it's cool that we're experiencing it with her.

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