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HieiLover2004 2006-03-09 ch 14,	abuseI love it. ^_^
freya kurenai 2005-10-27 ch 14,	abusewonderful story desu!great ending and nice confession there...
angel hakusho 2005-09-17 ch 14,	abuseMigod that was such a cute ending!! I loved the last line, mwah!
Nyte Kit 2005-09-15 ch 14,	abuseaww! cute! the italics section at the end was pretty nice. i think you could have separated it to let us know what is was though. the quick change from Kurama's POV to Hiei's POV to their future was kind of confusing. great job, though. i really enjoyed this story.
Taku-chans 2005-09-14 ch 9,	abuseOkay this is for chap 14 i forgot to write something else as a sequel idea... it's completely up to you though. Anway: How about you write about how Hiei feels with Shuichi gone and the one taking his place is the mischievous Yoko Kurama. And what about Kurama's mother, Shiori? What did she think? And where did kurama die? Did Kurama just turn Yoko on the spot or did he change later? How did Kurama die anyway? Please consider my ideas and help answer my questions PLEASE? thank you the whole thing is great buh- bye!
Taku-chans 2005-09-14 ch 14,	abuseI think you should write an extra chapter like an epilogue and say something about how Kurama acts on the anniversery of Kuronue's death. I think it would be interesting, since nobody knew the exact day kuronue died even Hiei would be baffled and Kurama would push him away and you get it... its all on accident btu kurama has feelnigs right? He too can deal with sorrow as well right? And what aobut Hiei's troubled past? Kurama isn't the only one with problems, perhaps you should make up something about him too, even if it is a long epilogue. It was good i rally enjoyed it tohugh i was disappointed that it was so short, but when you run out of time you run out of time. I do that too! Buh- bye! (P.S. Check otu my story "Strange Love") IT WAS AWESOME! I look forward to more to this story or another sotry (hey you can make it a sequel! Your such a great writer it's possible!)sorry if i babbled too much and you dont like this review. ignore it if you dont like it. anyway yur great!!
lazy fat kitsune 2005-09-14 ch 14,	abuseaw...i like it...and the last line is so cute1^^ write more!
Lita Kitsune 2005-09-14 ch 14,	abuseAww..it ended! but i liked it...i got and Idea, when i was reading them Talking about Kuroune...I though it would be cool(mabye) if like an evil Kuronue came back and tried to kill Hiei...ya know, the whole jelously thing...it was just an Idea, thought you should know, in case you wanted some ideas...
iggy - illmatiq shorty 2005-09-14 ch 14,	abuseAw..., sweet ending. I liked it.
shiorifoxiesmom 2005-09-14 ch 14,	abuseGreat ending. I just love a mushy happy ending. I'll keep an eye out for more stories from you.
Red Kitsune Flames 2005-09-14 ch 14,	abuseThat's so great. I think this was a very good story.
sabrinaw 2005-09-14 ch 14,	abusekurama's death kinda fit, ya know. don't get me wrong, i mean, kurama kicks **, but it just...fit the story in some odd way...good story all together. can wait to read your next one! Ja ne!
Nyte Kit 2005-09-09 ch 13,	abusenice chapters. they're going really fast, though. and you have Kurama and Hiei a bit out of character. it's okay, because it works for the story, but i think you should try to get them more in character if you can. update soon!
Red Kitsune Flames 2005-09-08 ch 13,	abuseTHAT. WAS. AWEOME! I am so glad that they finally told them, and I love how they kissed. Yay, wondrous. I can't wait for the next chapter of this terrific story.
Taku-chans 2005-09-08 ch 13,	abusenice one you should write more. this one was really good. try one maybe like his mother find s out he was drunk or somethin and he gets and trouble and feels bad and starts rejecting hiei not onpurpsoe of course but he feels really bad adn wants to be left alone. its up to you i dont make the calls just an idea. but it wasreally good and ouo should add more cuz it's already really long and i liek it that way! kisses!

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