i wished there would be apart 2...

co'z it's just 2 good...

Damn! Rei...how dare you! Ugh! Poor Aya...you should make Rei suffer! He'd toyed with Aya's feelings. Oh, I love this story nonetheless.

_it's a sad one..

huhuhuh..

Aren't you going to write a part 2?

I hope you will.. (",

...can you write the part two of the story thruth for lie?...please...i really like this story...and the pairing also...thanks

i love it so much

i just wish that you could add a few chapters or sequels..

but continue your work i just love it

Aw...so sweet...but yet sad! I liked it! It's an unusual fic! and it turned out perfectly! LOVED IT! GUD LUCK ON YOUR NEXT STORIES! love you way of writting! hahaha! ))

Hello, i just finished reading your story and i guess i was a bit disappointed because...IT DID NOT END VERY NICELY...oh, there are also a lot of grammatical errors...nice plot anyway...

sniff, that was so sweet ;3 i love it! it's going on my fav list! it's so sweet!

hey there please do make a second part okay?

lots of cheers,

catherine aka pinkwysteriahoshiprincess'_'

This is so sad. I feel like crying. wah. Great story though

it was so nice. keep it up and you'll be a great author someday. i liked it how you gave emphasis to the story. God bless!

ragh! so this is only a one-shot? well that's so cruel...wah! cruel cruel cruel... but then again it made aya happy (sheesh i can't understand my own revew...)

Please make a sequel

Ello! (",) This story has a very interesting plot... I really liked the story line, it's tragic, I know, but it's good... I just have to comment though on your grammar, and if you, kindly please, enclose your comments/personal opinion in paranthesis, I get confused sometimes e... And please, please make a sequel, I mean come on!... I'll be hoping for the next installment! _

Well it is okay. You changed tenses several times and have a bunch of spelling and grammatical mistake thrown throughout. The is a couple contridictary statements in here you migh twant to fix. But it would be cool to see a second part like serval years after. Maybe you could work in some of the other characters into it. I liked it.