 Tom 2009-07-28 . chapter 23 Your story was amazing. I loved every word of it. It was not at all what I expected, but the love story was done very tastefully, and all of the characters were at once well-balanced and believable without being too deep for the reader to connect with them emotionally. Thanks so much for sharing this!
A few suggestions:
I would have thought it was cool if Farber had remained a part of the story, rather than dropping of the radar. Perhaps make him a band member and Elenor's fling instead of Pete?
Sonny's face is so white, I can't imagine a "disguise" being complete with just clothes. Do you remember the spray-on skin Del used in the movie over his robotic arm? Perhaps you could have Sonny cover his face in that as his disguise.
Keep it up! You're great! |
 Jenrina 2009-01-09 . chapter 1 i like this so far. i hope i'll get more from you. |
 HAL-9001 2008-08-25 . chapter 14Just a little thing that's been bugging me:
"Prescient" is similar in meaning to "precognitive" or "predictive". I think the word you want is "precinct", a division of a police department.
I like the story, especially Sonny's dialogue and backstory. |
 linkoftrust 2008-06-02 . chapter 23 I love your fic! it's just made of awesome : D
but the epilogue was... nhé... don't like it much...
the rest is made of win |
 Icarian Angel Wings 2008-01-16 . chapter 4Wow very touching. I love the detail you put into and can picture the entire thing in my head. Especially the way you describe Sonny's movements, its very refreshing to find that amount of detail, but not surprising coming from such a genius that you are ^_^ on to read more!
Icarian Angel Wings |
 Icarian Angel Wings 2008-01-16 . chapter 3oh, i hope he finds sonny before something bad happens to him. I love Sonny and would hate for anything evil to befall him. Heh, i love that motorcycle and Will Smith looks Damn sexy riding it, wish i could be in back holding on to him as we sped to our destiny lol. Great job, reading more... |
 Icarian Angel Wings 2008-01-15 . chapter 2Awe, that was a cute chapter. I like how Sonny is free but still acts kind of like an obedient robot. Heh, i didn't think Spooner would take him out in public though, i would have thought he would have at least gotten a disguise for sonny, aren't robots beaten and confiscated on sight? Does Sonny have a bit of a crush on Dr. Calvin? Guess i'll read on to find out. Heh, im so used to bugging you to update but now i don;t have to!
jade |
 Icarian Angel Wings 2008-01-15 . chapter 1Wow, great first chapter, i'll say it again, you got some talent girl! i'm hooked now, i'll have to read more! That S brand gives me a chill though, somehow im thinking Sonny will get the blame? Ek, reading on...
Jade |
 williamjamesw 2007-10-22 . chapter 23This is the first story I've read in this fandom. I liked it quite a lot, very engrossing and well written. |
 Mrs. Optimus Prime 2007-09-21 . chapter 2This chapter was great! I throroughly enjoyed it! |
 Mrs. Optimus Prime 2007-09-18 . chapter 1Okay girl great chapter! I really like it. I'll be trying to read a chapter a day.
Mrs. Optimus Prime |
 Enno Vy 2007-09-18 . chapter 1Yay, another robot story! I like the descriptions.
Do you think we can get to start a category for Asimov or for robots? |
 gone 4 gone 2007-05-17 . chapter 2Whoo hoo! Another I,Robot fan! UPDATE UPDATE!!
P.S. Sonny for President! |
 Earthangel91 2007-05-14 . chapter 31Awesome! Very edgy... I didn't know Sonny could say something so disturbing when he threatened Jack. Of course, that's what mkaes it so interesting. Good work! |
 Kirmon64 2007-05-08 . chapter 31At first I wasn't going to review (which is what I normally do), but then I felt kinda guilty for not reviewing something so good ;)
And I really mean that; this has to be one of the top 10 fics I've read on this site, which is a pretty big compliment considering there are a lot of fics here :) I mean, the spelling and everything is perfect, as far as I can tell, and your characterizations are spot-on. I could totally picture Sonny's ending sentence ;) |