This was awesome! It was brilliantly written, wonderful job! I love the end..wonderful! Brilliant! You're a brilliant writer!

Very sad and very beautiful. You've got real talent.

beautiful poem

OOh...I like this. It was very colorful in my mind. I love how...dark it was, and then at the end, there was hope. Love it, love it, love it.

This was lovely. It reminded me of me in my Forgotten days. I am Allista, the Forgotten Archangel. Lover of doves. This was excellently written and I enjoyed it. :: bows head slightly :: Thank you for your beautiful words.

Beautiful...just beautiful.

Hey! That's so cool . I like the feeling! It portrays the death and the resurrection very well! The last two lines were very refreshing.

good..but your COMPLETELY missing the point.

Werecat99, it's in the Bible section because it's a metaphor-thingy. Allegory, I think it's called. You know, like Narnia? Think about it. I wrote it during the Good Friday service at my church, if that helps any.

*Sits stunned for a few minutes* Ooooh ... pretty. Not enough people cover the dark side ... or is it that too many do? Besides 'white now more' ('no', not 'now'), don't change it. AND LET ME BETA-READ! ;)

An interesting poem. An unrelated fact- did you know that the dove is the most violent bird, often killing it's young? Just a fun fact of the day. Honestly, though, I did like this poem...

This was good, although I fail to see why it is in the Bible section.

why did the doves have to DIE?

Beautiful.

Excellent! Keep writing because with this poem and your monolouge 'A Soldier's Tale', you obviously have talent.