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| xXxErikahxXx 2007-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseThat's the way...Well, I was starting to sing a song. I don't actually know the words to the song though. The point would have been that I lied it though. It was lovely. |
| KatieKat112211 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseaw! so great |
| onetreefan 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseoh very cute story. i loved it! very good job! loved the EOness! onetreefan |
| Michelle Birkby 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abusevery very nice |
| shippergrl25 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abusecute! Now wat eppy is this from or is it from a past story or wat...any how i could read and understand wat was goin on without seein or readin a prior sotry/eppy. extremely well written and very classy at the end. loved it! |
| BrittanyLS 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! I could see Livget jealous if she thought Elliot spent the night with anyone else! |
| blackxrosexvampire 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseCute, I like it. ^^ |
| Bribles 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseAW! ELLIOT AND OLIVIA FOREVER! BL |
| Mikaia 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abuseWow! I don't even ship E/O, but I read this because I wanted to see what some of those fics were like. And I must say, I'm very, very impressed. This was believable and well-written. Props for good portrayal of the characters (not to mention command of the English language). Keep writing! |
| Poeticpunk777 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseYAY! I love happy endings! Good job. ~Carissa~ |
| Chronicleofabutterfly 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseI like that! That was awesome, very well written! I hope you got more! Keep it up. |
| tria246815 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseah casey and elliot ah.. ok false alarm people the OE is back and so is the happy. :) LOL _ i love the story i hope you update soon tria |
| SVUFanatic611 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseOkay, let me just get this out of the way. WOW. This was freaking amazing. Normally, when I come here, I see a lot of different...well, I'll call them "interesting" for semantic purposes...things. Their grammar is off, their punctuation is horrible, they have no sense of characters, and they're all over the place with plot, emotion, and whatnot. I did not receive any of that from this masterpiece. Your grammer and punctuation were "spot on," as my brother would say, your prose was incredible, your style was wonderful, and the characters were just so in character. I could actually see Olivia and Elliot having this discussion. You stayed true to the characters, the show, the English language, and you have created something incredible. So, back to what I was saying in the beginning. WOW. I normally don't put authors onto my favorite authors list unless I like several of their writings, but I do make exceptions every now and then. You are definitely one of them. You deserve so many more reviews than these few, but don't let the number get you down. You seem like an incredible writer with loads of potential. I'll definitely be looking out for more things from you. So, enough with this novel-sized review. Just wanted to tell you how great you are. :] Happy Writing! adios, Jessica |
| KTMAC62788 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abusewow that was good...if ur going for a oneshot its good but bc i like long stories i think if u can u should keep going |
| Rusticated 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThat's actually really good. It's so, so cute, and again, very well written. |