Hi, I know you haven't updated for a few years now and its likely you won't finish all the chronicles but you should try and get this story completed, yes there are some plot holes that may have discouraged you from writing but even if you can't edit them, you should try to complete it nonetheless.

And Good luck to whatever your doing in life.

Ok, you've had 5 years to think of the rest of this...SO WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? Ok, so there are some plot holes, but all in all this is a very good story. PLEASE update it.

Please update this!

I read 32 chapters of this story before looked at the last update date and relized that would never read the end of it.

I am now very sad.

to all u flamers out there,go jump off a cliff,its people like u who come up with some of the dumbest crap and overexagerate flaws no else notices or cares about just so u can critisize an amazing story like this to the point that the author quits updating.

just like the person who was writting a story called "path to tameran" and abrublty stopped cuz of a bunch of flammers,even tho that was the BEST story on here...

but cid,dont listen to these trolls and update this great story :D

this story is absolutly excellent,and hilarious..

both when raven made every1 stfu,and when starfire slapped the shit out of robin

roflmfao X D

i love these books but you really need to finish. I am now waiting on three different books to be finished. Please finish this one

i LOVEEE it ! (: i totaaally waant taahh knoow whaat thaat captain will doo taaahh fobin and his stupid actioons . updatee soon !

i can see only one thing wrong with this chapter, starfire and blackfire are the only tamaranians who have starbolts. they were experimented on by the psions. otherwise perfect

this was so very, very good. It is such a shame it has been over two years since an update... please finish if you can!

LJ

wow - really, really good!

oh Robin, that's such a mistake on so many levels...

great job with this!

LJ

what a wonderful chapter! I love how you brought Robin and Starfire together. Great job. I love your writing style.

LJ

this is so well written and exciting

favorite line - "He might as well have s’lored you right then and there.”

LJ

this is such a great story, I can't believe I haven't read it before. I see its unfinished but please, think about it. I'll review anyway.

favorite line - re: kissing not meaning the same BB'that sucks', Star 'more than you know'

well written, great plot

LJ