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Awesome job with this battle Cid. The action moved at a nice pace and I could easily picture what was happening. Keep up the great work!

Nice. Update

I wanted an update and that's whay i got, but now i can't wait for the next one! I love this story so much! you can't just leave me hanging! I could've done with a little more RS fluff, but really, who has the time to get all mushy when two whole species are in danger of annahilation (sp)?

Please update as soon as you can!

This SO kicked monkey butt!

TF

Alright! This chapter is really interesting and really was impressive. Great battle between Starfire and Blackfire, the war has started, and great dialogue. This story is a great example of what stories should be like, be proud of that. THE TITAN CHRONICLES, EPISODE I: THRESHOLDING has a 5 out of 5 and letter grade of A, the highest honor anyone can recieve! This was Jordan R. Was Here cheering you on to victory. Peace out and rock on CidGregor.

w00t! Go huge battle scene! Another awesome installment of Thresholding! I quite enjoyed this chapter I loe how you keep everyone in character. I enjoyed the fight between Starfire and Blackfire very cool. Write more soon! God bless!

Kick Ass Update. Write more soon. Please, Please, Please.

This is completely amazing. OMGF - I can't even think. I am stunned. Bewildered. THISROCKSTHISROCKS!...Okay, that does it. This is officially on my "Fav Stories List". O/A, I am stunned. You got the characters just right, mechanics; perfect - everything about this story rules! And it's hard to convince me that story including BBTerra rules, honestly enough.

HOLY SOCK!

Thinking of how arrogant blackfire and how it appeals to her does not mean I’m biased to graham who is just as similar, the difference is graham portrayed some characteristics as a general, even under loss that was out of character and was even silly at times.

i admit the chapter shocked me (hence my opening statement) I don't mind any villain just strolling in as long there's a good reason as to how.

The gords are eight foot? Christ that's tall, certainly this changes things I was expecting a big battle but now it looks as if our heroes are going to dart in quick retreat. Its good in a sense I haven't reached the end of the story, now that i can keep with the flow of things but I am genuinely worried over star's fate. For starters its M rated and half the stuff so far is pretty much T suitable so I can imagine some gritty stuff next as its going to get darker.

Second I know blackfire will be more spiteful, hell comic blackfire let starfire be abused by the gords so yes I am worried. And that is victory to you for producing a chapter that gives of that effect as i thought they'll just get married and then go and kick ass!

Ah now the plot intrigues me, blackfire's entrance was short and almsot mystical. I was right to suggest eariler things would get more complex, I like the idea of blackfire siding with the gord's. Its the only way for her to be threating.

Tamarain women with sizeable breasts (And I thought starfire's were sizeable enough)er wait erm...great chapter

moving along...

This was a very seductive chapter, you said romance was your strongest part on writing. I'm in agreement over this, the touch and spark of the darker desire that lingers robin is believable and adds to the drama wherver he would pass the test ot not.

Its good of you to line up the JL heroes and focus soley, better yet that batman would hold some form of resenment to terra. The only thing this gurantees is that things are surely to get more complicated.

The maze was presented well, the involment of the justice leauge is unavpidable given the sheer scope of this story, but he should be asked if he knows about the wedding or will he be the best man?

The trial was long and was deftinely testing to robin, resorting to Beastboy's tactics in trying to solve mazes made me laugh, seriously. Robin just saying eney miny miny mo cracked me up after 19 chapters of him serious.

Jesus, does galfore want starfire to get properly married or become a early widow? I can't help but think that gal is almost mad but its his culture i suppose.

"The breath of my Beloved" Was a nice, if, cryptic riddle. I can see why you wanted cyborg and co mentioned from the last chapter to keep up the continuity and not make their appearnce here just appropiate to how gal got star's suit.

The gord's are starting to worry me, they must have a plan...unless they got sky and are currently watching robin's trials as well. (just a thought)

Somewhat sucidal but it worked, the combat here was pretty fluid, the beast and its power was constantly there. I liked the idea of robin of trying to avoid the fight at first, it would be nice if Tromand’r showed robin an 'alternative' way of how to beat the beast at the end rather then resort to throwing himself in the jaws of a monster.

Persoanlly even though its good to show their still around i didn't think cyborg, BB or terra were needed, keeping focused on the trials would be fine as it is.

As much as I didn't see the ending for this chapter, robin facing a life threating task already during a supposed life threating scenario outside is unusual, just what is the marriage rate succsess in tamarain if the first thing a groom face is a big mutant dog?

Its good seeing time with raven and star, I can't blame raven for prying into star's mind after her stuttering of words, this was a nice and rather light hearted piece of work. Even if getting married before a galactic conflict is somewhat 'questionable'