Dude!. . . you like seriously need to continue writing this cause, well lets face it, this story fucking kicks ass XD, and and and we need to know what heppens in the end O.o cause this story/series of stories RAWK! seriously 3 there great, keep up the great work amigo. ohh while i remember, dont let this be the end, remember there is still ep.4,5 and 6 to go :P and am itching to know if star n rob can fix the debacle and what the captain will do. once more GREAT WORK (Y).

David (Y)

P.S i hopw you realise i read episodes 1, 2 and 3 today all in a row, you cant stop now i need to know what happens.

p.p.s - use that to sent a reply if you want ] or add me or whatever or just reply via this 3 see ya

David (Y)

This is a great story, one of the best TT fics I've ever read.

Update soon!

Hi! I came across these stories while I was searching for BB/Terra fics, and I'd like to say I LOVE them! Also... Terra's little apprentice oufit rant cracked me up... I know that oufit really well, for some reason the only character from the show that I could draw well is Terra in the apprentice oufit... anyways, keep writing!

I can't decide what to think of this, firstly, I get the impression this was inspired by someone who loves watching those glory films where America saves the day (ie: Independence day) You throw everything to the most extreme without stopping to think.

I suggest you start reading some books that actually deal with war and conflict along with tactics. Giving the gordaninas no character just robs the sense of menace (other then their large in number and just shoot randomly) along with any believability that they are battle smart.

I think someone brought up a good point that earth would have no value given its been struck by a piece of the moon for example, the destructive impact of a 200 metre asteroid would equate to 600 megatons, 800 metres (half a mile asteroids such as the ones in this story) would unleash well over 10 megatons, the watch tower that had a close shave with one of them would had been pulled in by the sheer pulling force of the asteroid itself (These chunks of the moon are hurtling faster then 70,0 MPH in order to cross a distance over 800,0KM to crash into the earth.) The one that struck the great reef would have caused a Tsunami beyond imagination, entire shorelines would be erased (and that is just by a 200 metre asteroid, you would had produced something more unimaginable). The fact all four of these brutes have slammed into the earth means its end simply magnifies the doomsday scenario. Which begs the question just what the gordanians intend get out of this conquest? They destroyed earth. End of. They might as well leave and the let the Tamarains use their resources in trying to save earth before attacking again.

Its this matter of putting up the titans against such silly and unreal odds, the sheer patrotic-ness of how the good guys fight, and how you grind out these battles that makes it a sluggish story. The subplot involving 'marriage' between star and robin which is overshadowed anyway by this whole conflict and is nonexistent in its purpose. Character development is measured in who has the better 'one liner' other the over.

There is much to be desired and your bad science along with the battle tactics has ruined the story, good stories are about making the odds between hero and foe more believable.

Since I believe I've already sent a review, this message is going to be more of a plea.

Can you please finish your story? You are such a great writer, and I (along w/ others, I image) have been waiting forever for the continuation of this story in particular, as it is probably the best you've written so far (in my opinion).

I know you are probably busy, but could you please find time to write the rest of your story?

Thanks!

who the fuck is post?

When a story relies on overstretched battles and a running sex gag then you know its going to end badly. Seriously, the Gordanians are nothing like the JLU version (which they should given the JL are in) at all and wern't the Tamarains held at bay by remote controlled enemies mastermined by blackfire? you can add there silly culture but making them look like a militry power is a total rewrite. The conflict is over glorified and the casaulties left to mere dramatic effect. No mention or concerns of casualties, diesease, injureies, pointing the finger of blame to someone. It is all very gung-ho and highly one dimensional.

A reader starts to worry about the quality of a story when the writer starts introducing star wars tactics and 'sound effects' If it wasn't for some pestering reviews posted on here you may have still have been writing about 'scout ships' and 'battleships'

the presenatation is well put but behind the face of it is a bad running gag of jokes and a predictable plot. to that most this revoolves round the idea of star and robin must go through the 'ritual' which covers half the theme of the story is dire. What subplotsb are there except 'let's band round the 'evil' gordanians' and the tiedious sexual fustration between starfire and robin.

And if you honestly, honestly thought putting slade in was a shock element than your lacking more creative spark than expected. name me just ONE Teen tiotans story involving robin and starfire that does not include SLADE. Every chapter seems to delve into more of the cliches.

You are also aware that the Titans would be OLDER when the justice league was estabilished right? Or that sladebots lack any form of tactical assualts say move forward and fire with laser shots that lack the shots per minute than say a M16 for example. The destruction of the moon or even how the gords did it without even the good guys knowing it is one large plot hole and let's not forget nato has the proxmity of 50 warheads. The idea its america landing there in italy and not say its own forces or of nato seems you lack understanding of poltical and militry capability of other regions.

Its bad enough in one other story you have terra (a 14yrold) comparing her to denise richards (such intrests are not welcome on this site) but you need a serious revision in laying out a story that is actually a story that has complexity and knowlege of tactcs in space and other such battles because theie very basic and seem to be drawn by the mind of a 4yr old.

I think your a very arrogant man, because for someone who is meant to be a student at university your not exactly picking up on the traits that makes good writing and good story telling. a lot of this is cliched ridden and the way you potray starfie is dreadfully simplistic.

This is Ridiculous...

Don't write stories if your not going to have the decency to update them.

I'm sorry if that cane out harsh, but it's the truth

Whe!

Here we go!

:-D

Positives:

Very action packed

Some great battle scenes

Diagloue is good and the story is moving along at a good pace

Detail and description of feeling are good

Negatives:

- You could work on description of setting a bit more

- You took your sweet time updating!

Personal Comments:

* I found this chapter very nice and action packed, so it was good to come back to it after a long break.

THE TITAN CHRONICLES, EPISODE I: THRESHOLDING has a 5 out of 5 and letter grade of A. This was Jordan R. Was Here thinking I may be crazy. Peace out and rock on CidGregor.

Mouu...a lost of Motivation? lol I understand..that happens to me alot too. But our review bolster your motivation ne? lol. Anyway your doing a great job...please continue.

w00t!

I'm liking it, good battle scenes and detailed discription. Write more soon :) God Bless.

ALLRIGHT! Finally an update - a kickass update, too!

...I'm waiting...(whistles)

Keep to your promise, okay? Cool.

-AlohaFox