This was definitely an intriguing opening scene, I love the Tamaranians and can't wait to see what you do with them. I'm also mad at you because you won't tell me anything which is just so wrong because you should tell me everything. I'm going to go back to yelling at you now, but I can tell I'm definitely going to love this. As usual.

Horray! About time this story came. Nice opening. So far I can say you have a good story going on here just by judging the opening. But I can't say much until the story gets going. So for now THE TITAN CHRONICLES, EPISODE I: THRESHOLDING gets a 2 out of 5. But that just the opening, my review will raise as the story gets going. But until that time, this was Jordan R. was Here being robbed at gun point. Peace out.

YAY! A new Titan Chronicle... _

On thing to remind you about Tamaranians, that most fanfic writers choose to forget. Only Starfire and Blackfire can shoot lazers from their hands (and also from the eyes for Starfire)...The others can fly, have super strength, and survive in the vacuum of space (although the strength is not as great as Starfire and Blackfire's strength).

After that... the only thing I would like to mention is that Tamaranians aren't that much more advaced than Humans. If you remember from Betrothed, part of the reason they couldn't 'fight' against the invading army (besides it all being a hoax set up by Blackfire) is that they didn't have the crafts needed to fight them... So, while they may have ships capable of spacetravel, Tromand'r is gravely mistaken to call them 'Primitives'.

I hope you can use this information to continue your good work!

P.S: will this be set before or after "The End"

An interesting start. The Tamaraneans don't get enough love - erm, so to speak - and so I'm glad this promises to include more of them, aside from just Star and Blackfire. And of course, nothing wrong with a war now and again. I'm curious to see how all the politics here will work out. And, of course, Tromand'r doesn't seem too pleased, so this may just work out in a way that I will not disagree with at all. Of course, it's never too late to throw in the M rating, either.

Yeah, bit of a rambling review, but the point stands: I'll continue reading.