This story is ego driven, written by a guy who advertises himself to the hard core audiance but not the general audiance itself. The plot is sloppy and the jokes unamusing. I really think you hate starfire and her people reducing them to a role where all they talk about is sex, sex and sex. The review stays in chapter 1 where te story should had ended at!

urgh, this is terrible orgnastion. the whole sex joke would had been funny if star and robin were actually in character.

Let's see, the moon shattered therefore causing unpredictable tide rising and stronger winds. Chunks of rocks that were at least half a mile acros hitting the earth triggering plate tremours and carbon to rise and pollute the starsphere. The great reef is more or less destroyed. The amazon is wiped out, the coming of an inevitable ice age and choas in human society with the effects comming within WEEKS and not years like black canary suggested. Yep humanity is going to survive this one.

I don't think you know it just yet but you have pretty much buggered this planet, not even the gordanians would have use for it now. You may have wanted to better plan out that scenario.

A very awesome chapter! Update soon please!

Wow an update! Def. action packed! Keep up the good work.

Things are really heating up... and Robin's really on a downward spiral with his relationship with Starfire.

Yup, whatever Slade's real intentions, it won't be good for anyone. The heat of a war is the perfect cover for him to take Terra and the other Titans down and make it look like the result of the conflict between the Gordanians. Plus by watching Robin and knowing how he thinks, it stands to reason that Slade has a fair idea of how the Boy Wonder's mentor thinks and if that's the case... well, I personally don't think Slade would simply 'allow' himself to be tracked unless he had some ulterior motive.

Now Starfire... poor girl. It takes a hard-loving woman to love a hard-headed man and these two fit that description to a T. (forgive the pun). Star was made to LIE to her people AND to her beloved Knorfka all for him and he's treating it like it's nothing.

Uh, oh... Tromand'r is HACKED OFF. Robin's life span may have been just drastically reduced. Okay, MAYBE he won't kill Robin. Hopefully at least knock some sense into the teen before it's too late.

Okay... here's the part where I beg...

UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

Poor Terra... you really gotta feel for the girl. Being forced to work with Slade again has really put her on edge. As if THAT wasn't bad enough, she's got Batman giving her the look.

Stare a little longer, guys! I don't think she's quite cracked under the pressure yet!

I see an 'Avatar' reference here. Love the show, but Slade wouldn't call her an earth-bender.

Only real beef with this chapter; no Justice League dialog. They would have thrown in a few good words. You focused too much in Lambert on this. I know he's the General, but the League would have had a lot to say on this, too.

The departure scene was sweet. Terra calling Beast Boy by his real name was the perfect way for her to get his attention and showed how much she needed him in these last few moments together. They certainly parted on better terms than Robin and Starfire.

All in all, a good chapter! Nice set-up for the chapters to come!

Forgive my delay at reviewing. I'll try to do better in the future.

As for the chapter...

Robin. Is. An. Idiot.

Actually, that's not entirely true about... ya know... the whole thing about sex. Many cultures in places like Africa and some old European cultures believed a marriage was not 'final' until the couple consummated their relationship. Plus, every tradition that exists has a background as to why. I'm fairly certain that there's a good reason for 'The Consummation' and why it's so vital to the Tamaranians.

Secondly...This is a WAR. And in war, people die. Throughout history soldiers would marry and make love to their girlfriend's/wives because they weren't certain if they would ever see them again. Robin can't say with absolute certainty that he'll survive... and neither can Starfire. Either one or both of them could die before this is over. Their LAST CHANCE to be together like that and Robin decides to be a jerk.

And poor Starfire... being made to lie like that... it's gonna take a LOT for Robin to make this right...

This is one of the most amazing fanfics I have ever read! You get the characters' actions and personalities down just right. Even though I am a major R/S fan, I enjoy reading about the conflict they are having, because it puts some reality into the characters and their relationship (despite the fact this isn't a realy show).

Keep it up, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

This story is ambitious and entertaining. Excellent with the dialogue - the perfect balance of maintaining characterization while having characters say what the need to to move the plot forward.

I freakin love this story! I wanted to read the whole thing before I reviewed. The only thing I would say anything about is in 'Sibling Rivalry,' Starfire says that Blackfire hadn't bested her in fighting since they were children. I'm pretty sure that when they were children, Blackfire was the better fighter. But other than that, it's pretty great. The battle scenes are in great detail and I'm glad I found your "Titan Chronicles." Can't wait until you update!

The Drama continues. I love this story. Update soon.

Positives:

The story has taken on one of those "That's not Good" moments.

Story is moving perfectly

Each character is true to themselves

The mystery of Slade's motives are becoming more interesting

Diagloue is good

Negatives:

- It lacks detail

- Slade and Terra's presence were left out

THE TITAN CHRONICLES, EPISODE I: THRESHOLDING has a 5 out of 5 and letter grade of A-. This was Jordan R. Was Here saying let it out. Peace out and rock on CidGregor.

so i just started this story and its really good

this chapter was so good, and i cant wiat to find out what happens next

i cant wait for more

keep it up

Oh it is going to get messy!

So it looks like Robin is going to get a talking to by Tromand'r, that is if the guy doesn't do a major beating first.

I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work!