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darkemoperson
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
Mamma Mia!! That was... indescribable? The story was very interesting I must say... Keep up the good work ;)
Willow-Bee the Cat
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Go Minato! Kick his butt! Loved this. Absolutely hilarious and completely in keeping with their personalities. Loved the part about Obito trying to keep Rin clothed by claiming a hair tie counted.
kaillinne arami
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
that's so Jiraiya. Minato's too naive thinking he can leave his genin with his old teacher and not expect the worst.
Shubhs
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
LOVE the story!It was definitely...INTERESTING!The concept was new and funny which makes it all the more AWESOME!LOLZ!XP XD XD
Rachel
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Love it!
Mournful Storms
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
"Obviously the purpose is to teach you kids values," he informed her, listening to his voice echo impressively in the large room.

"The value of our privacy?" Kakashi growled, obviously not impressed.

"Our dignity?" Rin inquired, looking more perplexed than ever.

"Our clothes?" Obito asked, looking like he wanted to crawl into a hole and die.

...I Died. XD Good work.
-Storms ^^
sixteenstories
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Hilarious! I'd like to copypaste the funny parts, but then I'd be putting almost all of the dialogue here. Especially Minato's reaction. XD
Elaienar
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
You're brilliant. My face aches from grinning all the way through this (I'm still grinning, incidentally). Teaching kids strip poker sounds exactly like something Jiraiya would do - and I love their sensei's reaction. It reminds me of both Naruto and Iruka, for some reason. XD
Ireallycan'tbebotheredtologon
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
Can't, *gasp*, stop, *gasp*, LAUGHING! That was so funny it wasn't even real; I can SO see Jiraiya doing that, and you had some great one-liners!
I hope to read more of your stuff soon.
Keep writing!
Aomushi
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
...My little brother wants to know why I'm laughing so hard. Poor Team Minato...heh, Jiraiya's still cool.
NoNAMEohmygod
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
Lol, I love strip poker!
It's about time somebody put it into a fic. Great work!
Jiariya is so freakin' hilarious!
antyem13
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
I can so see Jiraia (not sure on that spelling, just guessing) doing that. The kids deciding that it doesn't really matter in the end makes it even more funny. I've tried before to write something in the comedy genre and failed spectacularly, I congratulate you on the success. The story itself did seem a little fragmented, but I wouldn't know how to fix that even if I tried, so you did just fine in my opinion.

Happy writing. The one and only strangeness.
anbumoo
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
AHAHAHAHAHAH This was great! A little disturbed at Jiraiya, of course, but great nontheless! XD
FetishFemale
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
Oh mon Dieu, that was great. Obito's got the best lines, as usual in the fics I've read with him. XD The ending rocked my socks.
Jumpingbeans480
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
(ROFL) OMG That is so funny! I loved it!
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