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| Akasha721 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseWOW! You write so well. That was a heartfelt story that could have been true. |
| soubi202 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuse*sniffle* That's so beautiful. It just shows how much Ryo loves Dee and goes to him for love, protection, and, most importantly, because he loves Dee. It's just amazing... I loved it! Kee! |
| Nariel 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, Ryo, Ryo, Ryo. You showed him so perfectly I could cry and go Aw at the same time. And no, I can't do constructive criticism. But my review comes from the heart, so don't scrunch up your noses about teenage stupidity. Only one critic point: this scene ends way too early... *grins* Yep, I mean it the R-rated way... |
| Itsa Mia 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this one too! I love Muse! Sing for Absolution is my favorite song! |
| sykofangurl 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat! I wish it had continued...even though I knew what happened next! LOL ;) |
| Enter the Matrixxx 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseI love FAKE and i loved ur story! u gotta add another chapter! :) ~Lexy~ |
| huan yue 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI loved this fic - especially because I knew nothing about FAKE or any of its characters and yet it still spoke to me. I thoroughly enjoyed the subtle details, such as "even though I could stifle the sound of the sob I couldn’t hide the way it jerked my body." (I *love* that line.) I hope you'll eventually write some Weiss Kreuz fics! |
| monkey-fairy 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful, and I think Ryo's feelings were perfect on how you described him, wonderful! |
| Alex Starr 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was incredible. I don't think this was a songfic, really, but that verse you kept repeating seemed just right for the moment. I think this was a good interpretation of Ryo's feelings during their first night together. I think you captured it beautifully. |
| ColeridgeFan 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abusehow cute and sweet! it was beautiful. BTW, did you know that you are not allowing anonymous reviews? Well, whatever, it was such a well-written story! :) |
| Shelley1924 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuse*Sque!* I love your story, and I love Muse. Will there be a second chapter, please?! Thanks for writing :) |