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SilentKiller1
2008-01-07 . chapter 5
he is good. real good
SilentKiller1
2008-01-07 . chapter 4
i would go to another company if i was you risa
SilentKiller1
2008-01-07 . chapter 3
man, satoshi is fast in this, i would be scared to be in teh same work place as him
SilentKiller1
2008-01-07 . chapter 2
ill help you chase krad away with a broom
SilentKiller1
2008-01-07 . chapter 1
but satoshi is a fast mover, thats good
Snowberrie
2006-12-18 . chapter 3
LOL.. Satoshi is evil... xD
Craz Lollipop-Imp
2006-09-30 . chapter 5
this...was...weird...uh...yeah
alter ego
2006-07-09 . chapter 5
LOL! I love it! Loved the last and second last chapter... how did you manage to weave a plot into this thing? Lovely AU and I enjoyed how the tension between satoshi and risa played out.

Get going on your next fic!
alter ego
2006-07-09 . chapter 1
I like this chapter too! Short, sweet and funny. Great job.
fenrir-ice-wolf
2006-06-30 . chapter 5
this is a really good story! but i would like to know what happens afterwards, like in an epilogue or something
DXM Junkie
2006-05-30 . chapter 1
maybe he is a little OOC but it was so adorable that I couldnt care whatsoever!! SatoshiXRisa ai forever! ^_^ lol, I know little fangirls like me are so weird, but ignore that rant and keep writing the fluff! I tell you, WRITE THE FLUFF or I shall send a half ne-kid Krad after you and he will chase you into Canada and you will cry!! Lol, i'm a little on a suger high, ignore me. (write more stories)
Starian Princess
2006-03-19 . chapter 5
Almost faints. LOL. That was vastly amusing and entertaining. Satoshi and Risa have proven just how complicated their love-team can be. *cheers*
SilverGhostKitsune
2006-03-15 . chapter 5
O... O_O Big words! love the fic though!
JH
2006-03-07 . chapter 5
your fic was good but is was a little rushed

also Sai was kinda too forceful to me

it could have been better
Wings of Heaven
2006-03-05 . chapter 5
great story! i loved reading it! hope to see u writing more often ^__^
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