This fic is very sloppy. The plot is extremely difficult to follow, it's very hard to distinguish who's speaking in the dialog, and also, a lot of it just doesn't make sense. It's completely rushed.

I really am lost in the plot. Now it seems angels and God is doing this to test humanity.

So what is actually the end?

Shit what is going on?

Subaru just killed Seishirou suddenly. The Meiun reacted to it and kills Fuuma through electrocution.

Now Fuuma's body is possed by Lucifer and he kills Meiun so that Rociel can be freed.

What is going on? Are really angels and demons now appearing?

What's wrong with Subaru why does he want Seishirou to be his oldself? Why does losing that one eye mean so much to him?

Doesn't he realise that this Seishirou loves him just as much and now what is better is that they don't have to fight each other. They can be together.

Why are all the dreamgazers gone? Who is manipulating the future? Is Meiun going to disapper too?

I am getting confused here. The polt is so twisted. Seems everyone wants to change fate and destiny but the Angels and Dragons have no say in how they are being moved around like pawns.

What is Eien really up to?

Why is it Subaru, Kamui, Fuuma and now Seishirou know about the other reality where Seishirou is the Sakurazukamori?

Who is this woman who appears in the last chapter?

She is not Meiun but I think it's Eien.

So who is this dreamgazer which is left?

Who is the he who always says that the consequences are greater than we can imagine?

Why is Subaru breaking down ever now and then? I thought destiny has changed so why does Subaru still carry with him memories of the past?

Somehow I feel this isn't a good think. Sooner or later he will crack and Seishirou will lose both his sister and Subaru. As for Subaru he will lose his happiness and Seishirou.

So destiny has changed now?

What is this three Fuuma and Meiun was talking about? One is Seishirou, Fuuma and Shota...is it who is the next Sakurazukamori or whose fate has changed?

Why did Fuuma seal Meiun? Is it to escape from destiny?

Why does nataku call Meiun "Mommy"? It's so weird.

How come Eien is alive?

What is her purpose being alive? Is she the dreamgazer to replace Kakyou?

Is she more powerful than Meiun?

Ok, one minute Subaru and Seishirou is in the hospital.

The next moment,Meiun, Seishirou, Shota and Eien are coming back from Amercia and it has been on year.

Did Meiun do something which change the passage of time?

What is going on?

I thought Meiun wanted to give her borther to life and be with Subaru. Now she wants her brother to die?

Who is she hiding from who will kill her or use her aginast her brother? Destiny?

So is she wants to destroy the world so that her brother will nor die. What about destiny is she going to change? Her brother's destiny?

Whoa...dude, you totally overloaded my brain! All this stuff about angels and God..._ I like it! I'm practically on the bridge of insanity myself, so I like anything _ ::sighs:: I need to go get something that explains these things to me...Rociel, Uriel...should I get a bible? Or are these even covered in the bible? I was always an idiot when it came to religion and Gods, and deities and stuff @.@ I'm all confused now...I need to get someone to explain to me about this stuff, otherwise I can't enjoy this fic to its full extents...that didn't sound right...oh well ;; anyone want to explain these things to me? OMG, I'm babbling again, it took me that long to notice XP I'm a dead man...err, girl...oh hell, who gives..._ anyways, down to it, I really like this fic _ I might not understand it completely but I like it! I hope you get the next chapter out soon! I'll be waiting for it! Ja ne!

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! You killed my darling Tooya! ;_; Not to mention you killed my darling Yue, too! ;_; ;; Nice fic! Nice, nice fic! _;; Confusing sometimes, but nice nonetheless. Keep it up

This is sooo good. It has now been added to my favourites.. Keep up the great work.. I love the way this is turning out. I usually don't like the original characters in a fanfic, but Meiun and Shota are so well developed! I could believe that they're actually a part of X.

Oh, wow. I'm tuly impressed by this. It's such an interesting idea for a fic, and ties to the origional story so well. It's a wonderful concept, changing fate in the X storyline! Plus you did a wonderful job with the charecters! (You mangaed to pull off BOTH Subaru personalities, AND tie them together visibly!) You're a very talented writer, so Thank you for writing, and updating frequently! I'm hooked! _ Write more!