I am greatly enjoying this, and it may have been years since you last dealt with this story, but I hope you do continue it.

As it comes to suggesting something, i would request you

1. finish this chapter

2. finish this story

3. let uranus apologize at some point

UPDATE DAMNIT u finished the first part of the series so PLEASE dont leave us hanging UPDATE THE FIC DAMNIT ITS ASWOME!

You know it is a bit sickening that you have let this languish for 5 years. This small snippet for chapter 2 of Arc 2 is a punch to the gut and not emotionally resolved. You don't spend enough time in Nerima disarming us before this event happens.

Did you give up on your second arc? Did something happen in school making you no longer care about Sakura or some other aspect of this fic?

Spokavriel @ yahoo. com

So, when are you going to update, if ever?

Hmm, Ranko making threats, should I be worried for Bakura?

I do enjoy reading the Starting Over: Do you want to be friends? and this sequel. The only complaint I have is that you use "was" in both places where it is appropriate and also where the word "were" would be used. I'm surprised that none of your pre-readers caught it before. If these stories are a good sampling, you have very good ideas and can express them in text well. Maybe you should give the Starting Over series a re-read so you can correct the grammar errors. Keep up the creative plot-lines and don't give up no matter what others say.

I'm curious if this story will continue? I see that it has been quite a long time from the last update. If it is a lost project please mark it as such so that I know not to waste my time checking in on it.

I realy like the fic, please work on it aging and are you going to get Ranko an Yu-Gi-Yo deck or have her go Jubaan and do some Yomaan hunting

I'm loving these stories and I can't wait for the updates to keep coming.

One thing you mention that's a bit off. In this story you mention that Ryoga didn't know about his mother being remarried. But in the last story you mentioned that Ryoga was thinking about going home and seeing his Step Father and his mother. Just thought you should know about it.

Keep up the good work.

Congratulations on going into the realm of a massive multiverse crossover. :P

I don't have a ton to say so far, besides that I like what I've seen so far, and am hoping that this fic isn't going to remain dead. Thanks for posting what you already have though.

Like the story, especially how you tie the characters together. Especially Xellos. My favorite character in Slayers. Wish you would continue this story, I was really interested all through the first and was happy to see a second. Patience, while not my strongest point...ah who am I kidding, I don't have any. Hope to see what you continue with.

great story, just one question, why havent you updated this story, i fully enjoied its prequil (starting over do you want to be friends) even though i thought genma was let off too lightly (i thuought every one of the NWC deserved a chance to beat the crap outta genma) please please PLEASE pick this story back up again as well as some of your others (like your witch/ranma cross overs _)

I don't review as often as I should, but I am enjoying this series as you've presented it, and hope you consider resuming it in the near future.

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GET YOU'RE BUTT IN GEAR AND FINISH THIS! IT'S BEEN A YEAR SINCE Y0OU LAST UPDATED, AND I KNOW YOU'RE STILL WRITING! I CHECKED YOUR PROFILE, YOU'VE RECENTLY UPDATED ONE OF YOUR OTHER STORIES, SO WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED THIS ONE!

HAVE YOU JUST COMPLETELY ABANDONED ALL THE FANS OF THIS AND THE OTHER STORY! AT LEAST POST IT SOMEWHERE THAT YOU'VE DISCONTINUED THIS SEQUEL! YOU SHOULD AT LEAST HAVE THE DECENCY TO DO THAT!

I like Ranko's reaction to Ryou. It was interesting to say the least. Nice timing with Yugi and Tea though, I'm wondering about the two of them...sparks of a relationship or not? Entirely up to you at this point however.

Keep the chapters coming, when you get the chance.