cute, i don't really know whats going on but its cute and very well written

*big breath* Coolio...Anyway, I thought it was called "hitai-ate"? That's the headband, right? Or is it those two string-thingies that are wrapped under the headband? "bends to lick the furious hints of his desire"? Please explain. And... *change tune* ...your write pretty... ~^.^

omg +fav!! XD i heart this story!!

oh. i like it. you should make a lemon sequel. -__- everyone loves lemons. XD

Simply put, beautiful.

OH MY LAWD I SAW DIZ ON DAH NEJITEN COMMUNITY LOLZ.

And its still great! x3

-favourites,reviews,checks out your other stuff-

Oh, Im angstyalex btw. :o

^_^ I like how you wrote this.
Write more soon, ne?

Hmm...I'd love to read the next chapter of this (I can't remember if this is a one-shot or not) cuz it would be interesting to see how this change in their relationship came about.

Cool!! tahnks for adding to the nejiten community! heehee...there's not enough around...

nice story! hoping to see more!

au revoir~