Wow, nice one. I didn't expect this twist at the end, but it was very well done.

sorry i don't usually do this and i see this is an older story. it was well written in a way, but it was describing what happened and not SHOWING it...like a book report of the story you wrote...I don't know, it was more telling from a distance than involvong the reader. But the writing is good, very skillful, just hone it. :)

i totally cried, maybe bc i'm on a chocolate week but it was still a kick ** fic!

Hey!!Never read a story where Craig died well i liked it alot.

Very sad. I really am interested in the relationship between Joey, Craig and Angela. It's so complex, a man who's wife has died and left him with their child and a child from her previous marriage. It's a shame that Julia couldn't step up and tell someone, but often it's a hard thing to mention. People don't take it seriously until it's too late.
Good story, I really like the picture you paint of Angela and Craig. Very sweet and innocent to contrast with the sad fate that he goes home to every week.