aww man! that's sadder than the first one! great job! =)

aww... so sad... =,(

gosh..

that was sad...

why cant they just be together..

ow! i forgot he died

nice story, as always...rukawa sounds like rukawa...it's just sad that ayako only called him by his first name too late. this is good! do more stories about them.
i find it funny when he's jealouus of sendo esp when he said "i ain't going near that school.." like he really hated the idea of it. hahaha

wow..how i love ur choice of words..one shot...big time...imma big fan!kudos!

that was great! so well-written, as always.
update soon, if ever it's not a one-shot fic!