I think I read this on LJ before~! Either way, it's my favorite so far. Extremely IC and beyond cute. Zelos stealing his first kiss is adorable ♥

Ouch~ A really nice Zelos and Mithos perspective. That period when Mithos was with your group always has really fascinated me, so this part is appreciated~

*goes to read on~*

Ooh, nicely written swordplay! I've always disliked writing sword fights, personally. It's like, slash, slash, slash -- ok now what? You did it really well, though.

Also great and intuitive Zelos characterization and much snickering was had over Regal cooking with his feet :P

Aww~ I love this one! It sounds so perfectly like the game canon, and it's very funny to boot. I love the talk between Zelos and Lloyd about Sheena (tres amused~!) and the teddy bear implication with Lloyd was just great. ♥

I really like all these stories, but mostly, I really like this part, " Lloyd said, meeting Zelos' eyes with every word, with that caring stare that Zelos hated because he would never get sick of it." That was a great sentence.

Thank you for posting.

The first part is so-very Zelos-like (I had to laugh at him saying "We stand here and look pretty - which will be easier for me than for you ") and fits the series, the second part is a deeper look into his psyche, even with a bit of flirting. Aww.

Aww~ I love Zelos'...wistfulness? I suppose that's the best word for it. How he feels so separated from it all and an outsider. Plus, the cuteness really fits well into TOS canon and such. It feels like an extra forgotten scene from the game, just from a different than usual point of view.

Nice :3

Aww, I love the first piece. I think the clipped manner really fits Zelos, and Lloyd's idealism is well portrayed :P 'Tis cute. *wanders off to read more*

can't wait for the next hug! ^^

thats was awesome. next chapy please!

Your stories are so awesome! They're just a lovely balance of everything! I can't wait for the next one!

Cute ^^

Please do keep up

continue please!

w00t! I l0ve this fanfic! This is awes0me! ^.^ Please c0ntinue! XD

that was cute. very very very cute