|Reviews for Double Crossing|
| Dracosslytheringurl01 12/17/07 . chapter 2
Hello. I have to say that your Chapters are a little short and your use of punctuation is a little rough. Not to mention you don't really specify where/who is talking for the characters, but I guess it is okay for your first time.
I just say that if you work on it you will be much much better as time comes along. You are an up and coming writer that just needs practice to get perfect ya know? So I say that as time goes on you will make your stories/Chapters longer and they will be much more interesting and exciting to read. :]
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Fate: Raine Is Falling On Their Destiny
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| Glowfish36 10/9/05 . chapter 1