dialogue between harry and his daughter are too formal for a monoparental family, there is not really any warmth in them.

I liked this one... i would like to read more about Sam and her schooling and if harry allows himself to be happy and loved again... Mae

This as a fun story. Kinda surprised that you didn't have something from Ginny or another interested try to sway Harry's attention...though I doubt it could have been swayed...he was rather single-minded for one female.

Great story. Thanks for the great read.

Your Harry is one you don't want to make mad.

Thanks again

Wonderful story. I love the new Harry. Dumbles got the dressing down he needed. I like Samantha also. Harry would teach his kids the things he learned the hard away. Thank you for a wonderful story. masterfully written. Kept me on the edge of my seat.

great story and was glad to read it so keep writing and i can't wait to read more.

this is so moving. its what should have happened from the begining and i applod you for writing it out. i love how dumbles wasn't evil lie in some fics but just had his flaws. Your harry is one of the best i've seen you combined the love of a father with the braveness of a gryffindor.
keep writing
lexy

While i'm liking what i'm reading something isn't right:
Why she didn' get any concealment charms ? A new transfer student, black hair, green eyes, great quidditch player, good at DADA come to Hogwarts the same school year as Professor Potter, ok, she has a different name but...
Nothing "big" happened yet (but the last couple lines of this chapter may hit that something is going to happen)
Ciao!

It was quite a good story, here... With a good finish, the only way it could end.
I think that given how Sam was worried about her father, her saving him from Dominic was a good thing for her. I also iked the symbolism of Sam ending Voldemort, instead of Harry.

Not terrible but not particularly engaging either. Abandoning for now.

Promising. Somewhat awkward grammar.

aww you need to make a little one-shot sequal :) telling about what house they go into and how they all recover :) great story by the way :)

Great Story

I enjoyed the story - you captured what Harry should have been doing all along - taking the offensive.

DD is mad with the love and "turning them back to the light". Well, I preferred your way of handling it.

Thanks for sharing the story.

I've enjoyed this so far, but I do have one thing that I want to say - in your dialogue they're always saying stuff like "I have" and "I am" and "It is" when in real life, people are a lot more likely to say I've, I'm, It's, etc. then the two words. I can see Dumbledore saying I am and such, but for a kid like Samantha and for Ron, I can't imagine them talking like that.