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| Soccer-Bitch 2006-12-24 ch 2, | abuseawesome story. i can't wait for the next chapters. ^_^ |
| Christiana Anderson 2005-09-02 ch 2, | abuseOk, basic idea is a good one. I hate to say it but the story itself is very like most (90%) of the other stories on this site with nothing really standing out to make it a good read. Boring and monotone and the words that really stand out when i read this. |
| speedfanatic05 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseso heart felt. I'm missing Tim already... :( I would definitely want to continue to read this story. |
| speedfanatic05 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abusewow I think it's awesome! off to read the next chapter! |
| randomwriting 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter. I'm not surprised that Eric would decide to visit Tim's grave as well. Nice job depicting the sadness w/o getting maudlin. I really liked the line,"It's like being in a nightmare...you never wake up from it until you've moved on." Deep... & true. |
| speedmonkey 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseI love you to Tim. lol. This was a great chapter. And its certainly a great story. Please update soon. |
| melles 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseIt's good to have the "Speedle attidude" back! I'd like to read more, it's sure a interesting thing to read. |
| jewelbaby 2005-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseMore. This is good. |
| randomwriting 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseNice start. Could turn out to be an interesting story. I can see why you'd want to bring back 'the Speedle attitude'. Nothing about season 3 was the same. |
| speedmonkey 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseAw this is a great story so far. Hurry up and update! |