YAY! THAT WAS AWSOME! MORE GESEA OR ELSE... *snaps fingers*
Kratos: I will kill you and suck out your soul...
Thank you Kratos... Well you heard him, get to it!

It. Was. So. GOD!
Gesea is such a cute pairing! :3
You captured it very well.

AW! Genis and Presea are so cute toggether, if this was your first fanfiction, you r an ace writer, plz write more. -cough- sequel -cough-.

Blade of Pureness

i love genis/presea nice work

Hee, sweet little story. There aren't enough Gesea fics out there, you know (Though I only recently began to really like this coupling. I thought it was well-written anmd you captured Genis and Presea quite well in it. A job well donw and I really liked it ^^

I loved it! It looks like you put a lot, or some effort into it, and it really paid off. I like all the detail, and I hope you keep writing! Um, about a 9.4/10

I think this was a good story! I don't know why your E-Mail was blocked. It's confuing. I give your story an 8.7/10

Aw, such a sweet story! Genis and Presea make such a cute couple! You should write more gesea fanfics - I love them!

Very good story. I loved how detailed the battle and the Genis search in the forest was. The ending was very cute. I look forward to more of your GxP stories.

I really liked how this has started very cute especially Genis in the forest fighting off a tree branch : D

looking forward to the update

This one is awesome! Attention to detail is awesome. I loved the flashback too lol.

One thing i noticed - near the beginning you said Presea's hurt arm was her left one, then when Genis came he was looking at her right arm. Then you wrote "Presea shifted so Genis could see her right arm" or something. Just fix a few things there and you'll be good!

Nice story, very good ending! :)

I'm too lazy to log in. Anyway, it's very nice, good. It's cute but (Yes people there must be a but) you used the same words over agin in to short a time, try thinking of something else like here "She looked fro the dagger. She grabbed the dagger." You could've said soemthing like "She looked for her dagger, and finally her hand grasped the pointed object." Something like that.

I really liked it!There isn't enough Gesea around.You captured Genis personality perfectly.

Aww. That was cute! :3 I love GenisXPresea! Squee!