Do you know who I am? I'm your first reviewer! And yes I was hoping you would write more. Great story make more updates because I love stories about pirates and yes I like mudshipping! =-D

Hm, intriguing storyline. Definitely continue with this; I'd like to see more. We're hoping for a quick update!

I've been dying to find a fanfic about Deadbeard and that cutscene from TLA. I think this is great, and you should definatly continue it!

Can you update this story because it is good and it IS worth a try.

And I quote: -“But I can’t help thinking what would happen if he did decide to become a pirate.”-
Good question! I'd like to know the answer! ^.^

& Very cool fic idea. . . Deadbeard. Hm, this was interesting too, & it really helped set the stage: -According to folk law Deadbeard was branded the “Prince of Pirates” because he was the most talented yet fearsome sailor to sail the Eastern seas. Not unlike us he ventured to the further most tips of the sea searching for anything to aid him.”-

Update!
Maia

This looks like a good start. I'll keep an eye out for more updates. There is one consistent grammar mistake I noticed, though.

“If you don’t mind me asking” Kraden spoke up seriously, “how do you know this, Piers?”

There should be a comma after asking. It's like that in all similar cases. The comma goes after the sentence but before the quotation mark. Well, until next time, may your writing stay unblocked and your hand never cramp.

Interesting...reely...I wonder...wood Isaac bcome a pirate? Wood he...? Well, I dun no...since ur da author/authoress...sorry...didnt reely make an effort 2 find wut gender u r..hope dats not insulting or anythin. And dats mah review! Update soon I guess!! =D

xChocolate Obsessedx
2 lazy 2 use proper english so bare wit mah beautiful slang.

Oh... I did a Deadbeard fic... Kinda forgot about it tho cos it was so bad and rushed. A bit more effort seems to have been used here, so congrats, and keep it up.

Dont have time to give you a score, sorry.

SpasticDjinn
the Djinni of Djinn

Interesting story about Deadbeard, seems more like an action/adventure story. I guess it was ok, update please!