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| toppyoushimonai7 2008-05-09 ch 41, | abuseBrilliant! Sorry that's all I have to say... |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-23 ch 19, | abuseoh wow... I GET IT NOW! =D YAY! |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-23 ch 17, | abusemy first impression: Hideki is a ** up bastard. my second impression: Hideki is a really screwed ** up bastard. why is that? care to tell more about him? |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-23 ch 16, | abusescary coincident. Im listening to Simple and Clean right when I read this chapter. poor kouichi! TT_TT |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-23 ch 15, | abuselol. wow. Kouji's good at that. How did he manage to stop Kako from killing him? I take Tae Kwon Do, so I know that it really aint easy to stop someone whos good at it. |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-23 ch 14, | abuseKouji's a bit cruel. Kouichi is all miserable, and all he can think about is revenge. lol. when do we get to his revenge anyway? |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-23 ch 13, | abusepoor kouichi. so misunderstood. btw, is kako's name pronounced like 'Keiko', or something different? |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-23 ch 12, | abuseOMG! Kouichi's a pervert! lol! poor kako. |
| Aura of Chaos 2006-04-21 ch 2, | abuseOh no that bastard didnt!! KILL HIM! NOW! |
| x.XWeirdxnxWiseX.x 2006-04-14 ch 41, anon. | abuseUh-wha? *is confused* I really loved this story but...it was kinda confusing...but that's okay! Anyways, is the third out? Ima checkie! And if it isn't UPDATE SOON! ...or else... Please and thank you! |
| Light's Blue Blossom 2006-01-17 ch 41, anon. | abuseOMG! GOOD STORY, but there's a sequel?!?! You NEED to answer those questions/mysterious things b/c I want to know! |
| Wind-Blown Chaos 2006-01-07 ch 41, | abuseLOL. I love this chapter. Drunk Kouji! This story is great. I'm already reading the sequel and it seems just as good. |
| The Light's Refrain 2006-01-05 ch 41, | abuseLMAO! Ol' Kouji's all drunk and rambling now. His master plan has been complted. Now he can normal again (after his hangover, that is) I'd say that's a great way to end this second story, as it IS titled Kouji's Revenge, and now that it's done, this part's done. Now Kouji's single again: good thing, considering he's gonna be so screwed once his mom finds out he was drinking. It's hard to date people if you're grounded. Just a stupid nitpick, feel free to ignore: I think he should've been slurring some, since he is drunk. Well, now to the new story! Cya! |
| The Light's Refrain 2006-01-05 ch 40, | abuseWell, that was shorter than expected. It looks like you don't have much of a choice but to continue this story, as there's so much unanswered. The other story idea intrigues me though...I'm a sucker for angst XP. Overall, I enjoyed this story, even though it did get very confusing at points. I'm surprised just how popular it is too. Over 200 reviews, wow! My advice (just advice) is that you probably need to rewrite this story at some point. Since it obviously mutated so much in the process of writing it, you'd need to go back and smooth out/take out parts that either are unintentially confusing or weren't necessary/made void by the evolution of the story. I wouldn't suggest doing this right away: usually you can't really edit a story until a good amount of time has past and your writing skills have improved. But that is just my opinion: I have many stories that I'll never rewrite, no matter how much time passes. Now, off to the bonus chapter! |
| The Light's Refrain 2006-01-05 ch 39, | abuseHeh, so Takuya and Izumi finally have some private time. About time, actually. Though the final scene does seem a bit rushed. Geez, a whole empty room. Whenever we have dances, we use either the cafeteria or the gym. Can't wait for the conclusion. Well, actually, I don't have to XD Off to read the final chapter! |