Wow! I really enjoyed this introduction to your story! It was fabulously gripping. Another GC fan fiction writer, Astraplain, told me to go check out your writing. She's amazing - so I thought I'd trust her judgement and I'm glad I did!
Your story was riveting! And well written. Lots of 'showing' not so much 'telling.' I was never bored and only wished for more!

just beautiful

I just found this story. I really enjoyed it. You did a wonderful job with the relationship between the three of them. Florean seems dependent on Noir certainly, but also strong in his own way. Wonderful job.

This is one of my favorite Gorgeous Carat stories so apologies for not reviewing sooner.

The characters and dialogue are excellent, but the mood, so perfectly conveyed, is what pulls the reader right into the story.
This is a piece that deserves to read once for plot, then read again just for the joy of reading it.

*smiles* Fantastic work!

^^ Gorgeous Carat is such a beautifully drawn and written story... I'm so happy that I stumble upon your fic!

What I think I really enjoyed was how IC all the characters were! It was wonderfully done and the story line was a very nice one too.

^^ I enjoyed the beginning... With Noir teasing Florian about how he still owns him... :) So cute...

I also was quite impressed with the fact that you had the after-effects of Azura's deeds...! Oh... Yes... Poor Florian... I think that's one thing that You Higuri could have done better... She didn't make Florian have any ill effects when he saw Azura again after ALL he did...! ^^ But it was nice to see that you put that fact into this fic and made it really cute - Noir's so protective...! (heart)

I LOVED the last scene... Aww... Florian and Noir forever! (*fangirl squeal!*) XD It was really cute! Once again, great job keeping them in character for this BIG scene!

All in all, it was AMAZING! And I loved it THIS much! *stretches arms out really wide* !! Thank you for such a wonderfully enjoyable fic! ^^V

~Neko

I loved this~~! They were all very IC, and cute and ;lkxdfbxg.

Are you planning on continuing this? I mean, I know it says "The End", but is it really? (lol)

You did a great job in captureing the charactures! I can't wait until cotober when the third volume comes out!

PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! write next chapter I really am interested int this story! You have a very nice writing abilities and you just HAVE to write a sequel!

YAY!i actually found some Gorgeous Carat fanfiction! i just bought the second manga(in english) and after finding some translations of the next few books was quite deperate to find more to read and then i found this story! you kept them both very in character (which is amazinf, because it's incredibly easy to mess up something little and make them OOC)anyway, i'm hoping for more *hint hint*

Um... this is going to have an epilogue, right? Right? Please... Come on... I said please... ^_^

Besy served cold..like KFC chicken lol. Well I thought this was just awesome. You portrayed both characters accurately and you expressed both of them really well. I hope that you update soon cause I'd like to see what happens next.

This was interesting. I just got volume one the other day, but I searched for - and found - translations of later volumes so I wasn't as out of the loop as I thought I'd be. *^-^* The fandom is so small right now, but I'm sure it will get better. So thanks for writing! The more people interested in this series, the better.

Oh, and to the reviewer, Nariel. They may or may not have used the phrase 'Revenge is a dish best served cold' in Kill Bill (I don't know as I've never seen it) but it was originally coined by Pierre Ambroise Francois Choderios de LaClos (1741-1803)in his 1782 book 'Les Liasons Dangereuses' The original French version of that saying is "La vengeance est un plat qui se mange froid,"

Wow...just wow.

What an awesome story, so what happens now?

Is that it, is there a sequel?

Keep up the most awesome work, coolsa.

That was a good one!And the sentence "... revenge was a dish best served cold" is from "kill Bill", isn't it?
Glad you included it, though.
Waiting impatiently for continuation,
Nariel

Brilliant! Really well-written and compelling. I'd look forward to reading more of this if you plan to continue.