please keep it flowing

great chapter..bit short for my liking but hey i love it anyway. please update soon!

more! more! more! please? great, great story!

Wow! Totally awesome story you got here! I like how you get straight to the point! I sure hope Ryan's ok. . . and Trey, Art, Paul, Juan, Ben and Smack too! Trey is such an asshole! Why can't he just, I dunno, die or something so that he can't get Ryan into these messes anymore. Oh well, I look forward to more, so please update soon. BTW - you write some very sexy fight scenes!

omg omg! this is so frecking amazingly...amazing! holy rap it's really so intense please please update soon and tell me what happened to ryan etc..!

hey this is amazing..please update!

If Ryan dies, then make Trey die as well!

please keep it flowing

ok... please don't take this the wrong way, but could you please get on with it? I like your story, I really do, but I am so frustrated that nothing's really happening!

Wow! Please keep it flowing

omg This was a fun day tree post!

they were very very good and now i anly asked don't let pul die please. let seth and the rest help rayn with his wounted frinds

keep going and post soon

bye bye

Whoa, Power-Kirsten has taken over! Fancy new twist, gotta get used to it, but it's definitely "unread-of". Still haven't read it all, but keep going (you're quite good at cliffhangers, makes me want more)

cool cool cool! please update this is an awsome story

Please keep it flowing

THIS WAS GOOD BUT IT WAS SHORT

I HOPE THE NEXT WIL BE LONGER AND LET IT BE OVER THE FIGHT LET RAYN AND HIS FRIEND USE SOME STRATEGIE? LET THEM OM CIRCLE THE ENIMIE, so the can't run or hide.

keep going and post soon

bye bye