aaaand i'm done. you seem hell-bent on doing absolutely NOTHING different and i have better things to do then read something without even a drop of creativity.

she could have said no to being the seeker, that backbone briefly shown before coming into play for once. considering she spent quite a bit of time feeling like she was going to throw up why would she just LET herself be forced into a position where she would need to fly, and thus be nauseated, on a regular basis?

she barely knows neville, and she's doing her best to avoid drawing draco's attention because she'd not interested and he embarrasses her, so why have her even enter the conflict at all?

diverge damn you! canon isn't the fucking law! i'm glad this is abandoned, because hopefully that fact will turn more people away so they don't waste there time then if this was a current story.

whoo! more canon! yipee!

... note the sarcasm.

god this is boring. why did you write this? if i wanted to read HP and the SS i would have downloaded the .PDF and spent the evening in an equally bored stupor to the one i'm in now.

i'm still holding out hope that little bit of independence she's shown so far will make her end up somewhere else, and thus we can actually get to the fun part, but it appears to be a pipe-dream.

FINALLY, something that isn't canon, sort of. so chapters two through seven could just be summed up by 'canon happened', that's really something you should really mention in the AN of chapter two. it's useful information.

...okay, is this going to split from canon at some point? because aside from having a bit more of an independent streak this is just canon with 'he' changed to 'she'.

Hi! Loved this story :) though I did wonder about Harry's reaction to Hermione. Wouldn't she be more.. Irritated with Hermione? (I know I would have been, if I were her. Then again, maybe it's just me?)

Herlequin is the stupidest name ive ever heard. why does everyone think that james and lily would name their baby harriet or something similar had harry been born a girl. im pretty sure they wouldnt. theyd probably name her after a flower as per evans family tradition. j k rowling said that in an interview.

very nice

update son

and then the door opened. "I'm Rick James bitch! I'm the best singer, the best looki'n. I'm the baddest mother fucka you ever seen! Hold my drink bitch."

Harry: WTF!

Why is it always the good stories that become abandoned?

hey

literally the other day the idea of a female harry popped into my head, and how different it would've been if he HAD been born a girl.

your interpretation, is bloody fantastic. i really like what you've done with it and how you've portrayed the characters and just general delivery is just... me likey. me likey very very much.

one problem; it looks like you've stopped writing it :( obviously, i completely get the whole thing where life just gets in the way of it - trust me, i feel your pain :P - but it's just a really well written piece of writing. i applaud you for your witty thinking and just... being awesome in your writing xD well done!

whether you do continue it or not, i loved reading it, and couldn't leave my computer. just know; it's really good!

:)

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri

Snape's starting to be nicer to Harry. lol. Wonder how this is going to end up. Is Harry going to visit the unicorns later? Update soon.

I just found this one, and I have to say ... I'm liking it. Keeping to the original concept, yes, but stretching your artistic muscles and developing Harry as a complete character. I did notice it's been a while since the last update tho, I hope I didn't miss the party ... add another vote to the "please continue" pile ;)