Ohh..you shoudl continue this one too! I like it! hee hee hee...I'm just browsing through everyone I have on author alert and reasing any fics that look interr3sting, so yeah...consiter continuing this one, if not the other one, I like it!

Sorry but I agree with the person who said this was a Mary Sue. You need a beta reader. Not to mention, there are lots of grammar errors here. Was this supposed to be a Mary Sue parody? If so, it's not funny.

Your Mary Sue has a multitide of really stupid names.

Whe! sorry. i just had to say something. :)

Wow, nice writing. I wish I couldgive you more praise, but I'm not very... arty, in a critique sense. Oh well. It's just me.

This is beautiful! Keep it up!

Good...extremely interesting... keep the chapters coming , I'll be expecting them .

Sometimes I can't find anything better to say about fics other than that they are really cool. I apologize, but this is one of those times... so... "This is really cool." And pretty interesting. I hope you write some more. You obviously are a pretty decent writer. G'job

Again, please finish. You wrote it such a long time ago. Really, it's very good. I don't see why it isn't reviewed more than it is. I would really like to see this story finished.

Well, I think that first you should write a second chapter or something along those lines...

I know it's frustrating, not getting any reviews. But I can assure you that it isn't because of your story, cause it's great. I really like it. There must have been many storys posted at the same time so that they didn't get to read it. Please continue, will you? Being a Snapefan, I'd like him to change her mind about He Who Must Not Be Named and maybe a romance? Or they become best friends? Oh, and I prefer 3rd person writing. 2nd person sounds so, well strange. But that's my humble opinion.

Nice job, keep going with this.